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Reviews of Football System

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Football System

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  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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SirVic
SirVicLv6SirVic

Not a bad concept looking forward to this story. Something completely different from the fighting stories. I am looking forward to how the characters will bw developed and how the MC will relate to the rest of the world as he has lived this life before as opposed to be reincarnated in another world

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cola_addict
cola_addictLv3cola_addict

It's a good plot. Football (*ahem* soccer *ahem*) plus system is a good combination. Writing quality is good as well, no errors that will disrupt the reading experience. But the story feels a bit rushed, like the author is trying to cram everything into one chapter. It is detailed yet very fast-paced. I don't get much breathing room with one action after another. The plot device is forced as well. No mother in the world would take the words of her six-year-old child seriously, especially if it involves his future. I understand the plot won't go forward if it's not done this way but I just have a hard time accepting that. World building is Earth so there's no flaw to point out. Character design is decent as well. Overall, this is a good novel, I'm looking forward to seeing what kind of developments the author would show later.

Bluerose0308
Bluerose0308Lv3Bluerose0308

This story is highly amusing and pretty f*cking funny. The characters are consistent and the plot is fascinating. Vocabulary use is overall okay, but the writing style makes up for it as it is amausing in its own right. Additionally, I noticed a lot of competitor sport stories in the category tend to lack in the actual competitive sports department, but this story remains true and keeps the sports as the main plot device. Some people may say frequent updating is necessary, but the way I see it, I rather have good content every few weeks than a poorly developed chapter everyday. Keep up the great work!

KoFu_
KoFu_AuthorKoFu_

BEST NOVEL EVER!!11!!!11! Haha joke, well anyhow I'm writing this because I like the idea. If you like to read to pass time check it out. GO KOFU GO!

AInsta
AInstaLv5AInsta

Come for Aoyama-kun cover, stay for the great story. Man, this novel is awesome. I always love novel with a system in it. But this novel really make me interested in it. Good job for the author! Just read it, it's a great story!

MobinHood
MobinHoodLv15MobinHood

Great story, great MC, great everything! Only the Updates are bad, and with bad I mean TWO WEEKS without one. I really hope the author starts updating again.

theTwilightfan
theTwilightfanLv5theTwilightfan

Great story, I was really surprised as how good it is. The description said system and we have system, it said sport we have sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good! read "Be happy with sports" a very cool novel about basketball and life

Knossos
KnossosLv4Knossos

Is this American football or what? Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond Please respond

devildante777
devildante777Lv5devildante777

It's good but you have to update atleast 1 chapter everyday to interest the readers . Don't introduce props as it will not be his strength

EnderPL
EnderPLLv6EnderPL

Great story, I was really surprised as how good it is. The description said system and we have system, it said sport we have sport. I just would like for it to be updated more as it is very good!

NextTrap
NextTrapLv12NextTrap

5* because I like it :D But gonna read it later when it has moaahhh chapters. :) I still need some character to reach 140 xd Still not enough!

VanillaXiaoJie
VanillaXiaoJieLv5VanillaXiaoJie

This is really good and interesting! Before I realized, I was already making a picture of the little kid scoring a goal , in my head. Great novel and I am hoping to read more and more!

ElviniaTheElf
ElviniaTheElfLv13ElviniaTheElf

I'm your fan PureOtaku another acc....would you mind explaining me why there's no update yet? đŸ˜ȘđŸ˜Ș::........–---------------------------------------------

Little_Herb
Little_HerbLv13Little_Herb

Reveal spoiler

Lazy_dude
Lazy_dudeLv4Lazy_dude

This is GOLD!just with few chapters dang it!WELL what i meant is plz update more coz we deserve more and dont make MC too OP for god sa*e and i lobe u author 😂

Icezeroz
IcezerozLv5Icezeroz

Great story! Keep up the good work. Always love a good sports novel but there just aren't enough of them out there, hoping you'll continue with this one.

ahibam
ahibamLv6ahibam

started reading it a few days ago, the story is good, liked the novel but I have seen that there aren't any updates, is the novel been dropped?

QiyueWuyii
QiyueWuyiiLv4QiyueWuyii

Man, this novel is awesome. I always love novel with a system in it. But this novel really make me interested in it. Good job for the author!

AbdAzim
AbdAzimLv12AbdAzim

What a great piece of art. This novel inspires me to write about football related novel. good luck n thanks. ,...............................

Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv4Quiescent_Rumble

The language (English) is bad, but you can force yourself to read it. Then you get a little story which is not too bad. There are some books which you really can't read because of the bad English, this is not that bad. Nearly that bad, but not yet. If you have an alternative, read that. If you are very bored, try this.