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Announcement
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Love this story.!! Baes off of one my favorite animeβs so Iβm really looking forward to the nura clans take over.. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING !! π©π©
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Meh at 1st the concepts is nice, then author decided to bring mc son which is rihan in the mix and to make matter worst hes focusing on rihan too much and make mc like a side character... i mean wtf is he thinking? Why the fck he bring mc son for no reason? Just pop heres the reward for completing the quest, mc never had s3x but heres a son why the fck not... If he focus only on mc i think it will be a great novel, but sadly author making this a multiple protag trope which is killing the whole story
Dude, can I expect some uniqueness if he is gonna have a harem. Make his harem the unexpect ones and dont cuck Yun Che too much. Its somehow the problem with SI Fanfics these days, too much NTR. Why cant he have his own unique harem. And somewhat give chapters focusing on rihan. He is becoming a pretty good character. Probably even better than MC. Add some sid echapters about some interesting characters. I'm pretty scared on how you are gonna develop Greed/Yun Che, please dont **** him up much. You can make him an instructor to rihan on medicine but dont make the encounter too cringey. And dont make the missions too cringey and cliche wuxia events. Add some japanese flavor to the story. Dont rush the story too much too. Take it slowly but not too slow. Although I'm pretty excited for the Demon Realm ark, dont rush it too much.
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The Best Nurarihyon and ATG fanfic defintetly read this..................................................................................................................................................................................................... :D ..............................................................................
So if your expecting hyanna to be the mc then youβd be wrong. So the author literally stops calling him by his name and turn him into nura I think his name was. The original mc is gone and replaced with this other guy completely. Would have been better if hyanna never existed. This is another fanfic where the new mc kills the original. He gets a system but we realize a demon of gluttony was sealed into said system. The author doesnβt feel like explaining why and just skips the whole thing and puts said demon into a original mc body. He also paves a path for his son to get yun Cheβs heroines. The kid literally uses some random method to extract a poison that even the sky poison pearl couldnβt easily deal with like itβs nothing. All around itβs ok but the author literally downgraded the most deadly poison in the universe for his own convenience. New mc is alright but things take forever. Author does time skips without telling us what he did until we see it all in the next 3-4 chapters. The author has talent but he doesnβt personally to me feel motivated.
This is really good fan-fic. Too early to tell if it is gonna be my favorite on this site, but it definitely has potential. I also really love Nurarihyon! I love that the author decided to not have the MC be a horny and go after all of the original harem members. Honestly, I'd prefer he have only one parter(Yuki-Onna!), but I'd be okay with a harem as long as it makes sense with the character that has already been established(One who doesn't seem like the type to accumulate harem members randomly and without personalities). Anyway, really good story so far, and I'm looking forward to how you develop it further.
