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A very good novel indeed. It is one of my current favourites as of now. The development holds one to read on. Also, along with the charackter development, this novel became many times better. The only thing I can't really understand is why he won't just repeat one day long enough to actually understand his rewind app and optimize it e.g. stopping time. That way, he wouldn't have to worry about losing again.
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This story is honestly amazing. Its about a guy who gets the ability to rewind time (only 24 hrs) and gets dragged into a world of magic. Due to his time power he can't use mana so he has to rely on gadgets he makes to survive after passing off the rulers of the magical world on Earth. I suck at reviewing so I'll just recommend you give the first couple chapters a read (it does start out a little slow but it picks up once he learns more about the magic world).
This story is a hidden gem! I love the different style of the story compared to a whole lot other stories I read. I'm surprised that this story have so few readers as it seems compared to other stories. Mostly since I feel that the quality that the author provides is really good. I sincerely recommend this! 😁
*Remember, this review is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: Remember, most on this site like chapters to have 1k-2.5k words each, but since your story is done so well, I doubt that most people will complain.;,;. Positive Feedback: Good story thus far, You seem to choose the POV changes well and can keep a reader that thought that a story that is not isekai probably won't be worth reading enthralled.;,;. Your Character design works well and you have all the world background you need thus far.;,;. Personal Feedback: WOW, Just wow... I really enjoyed the first five chapters, and can barely wait to get back to reading this book, hope you keep writing until the end.;,;.