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A very good novel. The writing is good; way better than the other original zombie novels i read in this site so far, and is not that far off from official novels, even is better than the majority of them. The story makes uses of the elements of surprise and makes the reader view it in an 'open world' feel through the Main Character's eyes. My progress is up to date which is...chapter 4 or 6. The author made me imagine the main character's design not only through Third POV but also through the sight of a side character; which made me 'see' the boy more clearly in an ingenious way. Really commend you Mr/Ms author with that(Color of his skin & eyes in third POV, the state and color of his clothes through the tied up girl). The background is that of a modern world i guess...which is rapidly changing. I can already 'feel' it when i see how the people used to fighting back the main character(how this makes it seem as if they are used to fight and kill other people). All in all, I Love this. And i'll be looking forward to your updates!
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for now I give this 5 stars since I can see it have a very high potential unlike most of the original novels I read so far. the character design is good, while the background is kinda unclear though.... for story development so far so good. and so far the stability of a chapter a day is good. keep it up :)
So far i quite enjoy this series, BUT it has one major flaw and that is the rate at which chapters come out it's atrociously slow like the rendering and loading on early 90's pcs, it would be better if the chapters where triple the length but alas they are stupidly short. In short it's fantastic i friggin love it even but it's pathetically short chapters and abysmal rate of updates makes me comptemplate dropping it like a 1 star novel written by a 10 year old.
It's not very well developed, we know next to nothing about the main character and why he is so heartless. You need to try and develop a better understanding of your characters before you send them off on there journey, also update schedules are all over the place. But it has an okay plot so far, just needs development.
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