"Oh how observant, cutie," the woman laughed and fluttered her way to junior brother's side.
F*ck, I'm jealous.
Wait, think of Grand Master Aunt. Grand Master Aunt. Grand Master-
Suddenly, junior brother b*tch-slapped the woman, and her head whipped completely to the left.
What the f*ck?
"Don't come near me, trash."
What is with this developmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeent?!?
Tell me what you think so far.
I have a plot twist ready for the future.
LOL, but we're not even to actual plot yet. D*mn it all... >.<
By the way, check out my friends' novels if you want interesting stories and passionate writing (can't talk about grammar, though... don't tell them I wrote that).
YuKosaka's "Chuunibyou in Cultivation World"
23DN4L's "Cleaning up the Future"
I feel like you guys would purposefully go to their comment section to tell them this...