KillerHemboy
Author here. This is my first book, so although there might be a few hiccups in pace or narration, please do stick with me on the journey. I have completely figured out the story and progression till the ending and will not be dropping it. The character will grow likeable(hopefully for you) and you will not regret sticking with it for the long haul. Thanks for reading!
Normally I wouldn't review things I only read for at most 10 mins, but the impromptu start and fast pace made me pissed and agitated in a bad way very rarely would I feel this way and normally I would continue reading but alas it's like the 3 other light novels I dropped this year that i've been reading close to a year they started like this but I chose to continue them despite a gut feeling telling me not to only to drop and pick them each up 3-4 times each only to regret it this time gut wins instant drop. -_-
Though the story is still in it's infancy so far the world building has been great. Character development is steadily progressing and the author is doing a good job of demonstrating an d showing how things work as the mc discovers things. Instead of the typical main character (or at least the reader) suddenly knows every thing about this new power and any other power they come accoss.
I am disappointed. This could have been something great. But while the sentences mostly make sense they do not convey a story in their totallity. Your never quite sure what their talking about or why or what is happening. It is very frustrating. And because of this the characters seem flat, and disparate. This is not something you can sit down and get lost in the world before your eyes, instead it is a constant puzzle to figure out what is happening.