Hi. So, I'm the author. (The above scores are definitely biased :) )
I plan to try some things that are new to me in this novel. One is a mix of perspectives, such as third person omniscient, third person limited, and first person. If this get's confusing at any point please reply to me here and tell me where it's confusing so I can fix it.
Also, I'm not very experienced with combat scenes. I usually do a recap of what happened during the fight. For this novel, I want to show the actual fight and can definitely use any input you have in regards to fight scenes.
If you have any other recommendations, comments, or questions feel free to give a reply! :)