Once Human, Now a Parasite

The protagonist supposedly got tortured for months by a woman and is described as someone who became cold-hearted and ruthless yet not 2 weeks(?) have passed upon his reincarnation, he starts falling for someone else who basically did nothing much but look good. Seriously? Proofread your chapters please. There are also contradicting details or rather, certain details were left out of the story and just skipped with no explanations whatsoever.

Hi, Crow here... so I wanted to thank you for reading my story and if you like it (or not), feel free to post a review criticizing whatever needs to be criticized or post your honest opinion about the characters, plot (if it exists) and so on. Again, thanks for reading!

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The story has many to the reader forced moments. If the author has an idea he does it as easy as possible, even breaking established character behaviour. His power ups are correlating to the plot the MC has 40000+ Intelligence, but it doesn't improve his IQ even a bit. The auction house scene was so forced just to progress the plot,that I wished I could have strangled the MC and that he just takes the first random beautiful girl with a similar background as him as his girlfriend was cringe worthy. I'm actually hoping each chapter that she just dies off, which obviously will never happen. The main reason is they both act as 13 year old ***** teenagers even with their tortured past and she is used as a reason to make him soft. I read the story only because I have nothing left at the moment I'd personally rate this story around 2.8, but with many unjustified 5 stars in my opinion. I lowered my rating world from background 3 character design 2 and update stability 5. By the way I think 5 stars total are too much for most stories on this site and the stars are overinflated for liked stories, which is sad because stars lose their meaning this way.

He is torture by his wife and get second chance but his hatred is sealed. Why? Because x say too much hatred will make him insane, but i read he is not insane when he is asked by x. Okay. He can take stats from parasited thing, but after he get wolf body, he just eat the monster he killed npt use parasite skill so he get stat from the dead. Okay. After he got treasure and BOOK from zodiak tomb without reading anything he just go to town. Okay. You say he is bussines man but on auction, he just use 5 million gold coin as thought stone. Fu king Too many contradiction.

Most chapters are long enough comparable to 'novels posted in NU' and it is a good binge reading for a couple of days. The plot and the world building are impeccable to the point of 'there is an actual thought behind some events that may lead to some future developments and may be in the next couple of arcs'. However, there is some inconsistency in the MC's character development like his past trauma that hugely affect his trust of other people especially women, and no clear progression in which or what way his character will end up to be, either he is good or bad. So far, he stands in the neutral side of things and he just wants to be with his loved ones. One thing that I really love about this novel is the way how the author solve the OPness early on in the novel. I thought that the OPness will remain throughout the novel like convenient powerups to deal with the villains head on. Thank goodness that it isn't. There is still the worry that I felt as a reader towards the MC and co. whenever a villain much much stronger than them appears despite of the OPness reavealed early on in the novel. *There are rarely few misspells spanning across the novel but the story is still easily understandable. I am thoroughly heavily invested in this novel and I want to see it to its end. Good luck Crow in writing this until the end and in school!

Bad writind, dumb mc, the author use too much parameters that he can't follow his own story. Ridiculous, just writing numbers randomely to make space in te chapters. The idea was good but it's just too bad.

After he gave the gold coins to the old man, the librarian stared greedily at the gold coins for some seconds unable to believe his own eyes, but he quickly adjusted himself and thanked the customer, however, Arthur ignored him, he picked the books and left the building, the old man didn't stop speaking as he shouted at Arthur to come back if he needed any sort of book . 'He who is not contented with what he has, would not be contented with what he would like to have' even though the old man got a whopping 220 gold he still wanted more, human greed is really the worst thing in them. ...Author... just stop... because a business owner trying to get a high paying customer to return is definitely the dangerous and evil greed of humanity... It's not like they're just trying to get enough money that they can live well. Greed only becomes a dangerous trait when the person's demand for something will never be satisfied, and they'll go to any length to try and collect that thing anyway. So if I loved gold, and I could never get enough, and so I ran around killing anyone as long as they had gold. That would be when greed becomes a legitimately negative trait. Did the old man do something like that? No, he's just running a business. Just chill out with the 'humans are inherently evil and disgusting' ****, man. If you're going to try and talk about the greed that humans can hold in their heart, at least think about what's actually happening in the story you're writing first.

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Oh, what? You wanted a unique novel with an interesting premise and an intelligent mc, this novel is the one then! A well truly developed and realistic love? Great, this is the one for you! A mc whose emotions are like that of a real human? You got it. Hahaha just kidding, I the great author of this novel is going to ḟůςκ you so hard baby! The synopsis was interesting and unique but it instantly turned into a typical isekai novel very quickly. The "intelligent" mc is the opposite of smart. The "love" is so forced, it's ѓӓҏing you. But don't let me stop you from reading this garbage, instead look at all the other reviews so you can prevent yourself from jumping into this pile of ѕȟit and wanting to kill yourself after somehow managing to read all the way to ch 50 :). p.s. author stop being a little ɓɨʈch by replying to this with the copy paste reply.

I like this story a lot. You have great skills man. I hope you become successful and entertain us with many more stories. There are few mistakes here and there. If you can avoid them you will be nothing less of a professional. All the best.

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It's not a bad idea that you came up for the story what I hate is the way your trying to build a love for the mc and Lucy I does not fit when I read it somehow it feel strange even is hit hate was sealed and the mc feels kind of stupid ? Why can't you speak after 100 ?? Your shy to communicate to even an ant ? Really. You have necromancy and you fond use it but only focus on dark magic waiting a good dead knight lvl 50+ and then running to a Academy when your basically lvl 90. Idk men it's confusing so sadly I dropped it

I like fighting scenes and how the story steadily progresse. The overpowered main character is a plus too. I also like the fact that its not a generic harem. One heroine is more than enough.

Problems of trust doesn't resolve that fast(10 chapters) especially with you'r wife who torture you i doesn"t make sense.............................

The MC was ok in the beginning with an ok background and a cool OP ability and all that. The MC finds a cave with a lot of cool stuff in it that I found interesting then he decides to go into town and read up on the history of the world he was in. He then decides to go to an auction which is okay I guess,like he probably has better stuff anyway but ok. Then he buys some demon girl for "information" and I thought it would be cool if he becomes his servant or bodyguard or something like that but no,she becomes his love interest or something which doesn't make any sense considering of his history and the girls! I guess the author wanted to make him softer so he did this or author wanted romance in the first place and didn't do it well. All in all the plot was interesting and I liked the MC in the beginning but after the romance started it messed with plot and just made MC and the girl really annoying,in short romance was forced and it wasn't enjoyable after that.

This is the worst novel i have read so far in webnovel, if it was possible to give a 0 for the score, i would have done it. The first 10 chapters are good but it's just a trap...