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Comments of chapter undefined of Once Human, Now a Parasite

Jonathon_Keagle
Jonathon_KeagleLv1Jonathon_Keagle

damn... I never wanted to cry over a book before. but my God my heart goes out to Saly. even If she is fictional, I know all too well that there are children in the real world starved and beaten till there minds break and the hope dies.... good job author. (but in a side note. it takes months and years to overcome that kinda trauma in the real world. and that's only if the person is not too broken already)

ghost981
ghost981Lv14ghost981

**** the meatball // keep strong saly

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KinghtariusWR
KinghtariusWRLv15KinghtariusWR

Dear author-san, I know many (including me) badmouthing and cussing you, mc, lucy etc So please stay strong... the idea of this story is really good and I like it a lot But you dont need to please what the reader want on comments, make this story come from the real you I see when they ask romance, you push romance I see when they ask some x-rated, you push x-rated scene I see when they ask companion, you push companion appear I see when they said he's too soft, you make it ruthless I see when they said he's heartless, you make it soft hearted Just make it as much as you want but keep MC with strong 1 kind of character then if you wanna change the kind of character you have to stick with it Dont just put it as much as they want I know author have a lot of pressure, but make the main character as the one who have real character not character based on reader want For me that's what make a story become a story Make the plot flow and the character firm

Salkinwar
SalkinwarLv6Salkinwar

Thanks for the chapter. Out of interest, he learned that if he checks two or three times he not only can see the level and name but status and other information too (Around the first time he killed someone from the church, chapter 11, he tested it on Lucy) He says himself he was an idiot to never do it before, but at the same time it is the last time he tried it. I had never understand why. I had expected it especially during his stay at the academy. The same now with the little girl, I simply to see if there are other problems with her.

Errolstrom
ErrolstromLv12Errolstrom

Whats with the other girl? 🤔

CalciumLurcher
CalciumLurcherLv10CalciumLurcher

What happened to that transmutation skill?

Oldturtleinmist
OldturtleinmistLv12Oldturtleinmist

the meatball is a *****.\

VanshRaj
VanshRajLv4VanshRaj

thanks for the chapter

Carlos
CarlosLv14Carlos

thanks

TonioG04
TonioG04Lv13TonioG04

I could start crying 😢

Jaricvenn
JaricvennLv3Jaricvenn

Thanks for the chapter, very emotional one. Why doesnt he check her status in case its a curse or something? Perhaps if he gave her some of the dragons blood?

Infinite_Shadow_57
Infinite_Shadow_57Lv13Infinite_Shadow_57

That guy should have been tortured longer in my opinion

Goodbiscuit666
Goodbiscuit666Lv4Goodbiscuit666

Is she gonna become their child or something like that

Megmaconqueror
MegmaconquerorLv15Megmaconqueror

My heart... Author... I kind of want to kill you for what you put Saly through...😢😭

AriQoronk
AriQoronkLv5AriQoronk

thank you..

Dragonicon
DragoniconLv6Dragonicon

See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire

Calintz20
Calintz20Lv7Calintz20

Thanks

undeadreaper1015
undeadreaper1015Lv15undeadreaper1015

I know it happens but it's still horrible when you see it even in written form when kids get abused

DeathLingers
DeathLingersLv13DeathLingers

Sweet and all but the constant baggage is getting dull. Since he could be finishing off most of his books now and these two could have some moments together and then there's what to do with her after they get to the next continent

Keyweilder
KeyweilderLv6Keyweilder

Adoption?

kbaxter1
kbaxter1Lv3kbaxter1

good story