Comments of chapter undefined of Battle of Ascension

Wow. Just wow. He won’t just add some points into a system in his head now because he is tired. Wtf.

first of all why does he need to raise the lvl of ai helper all at once? 2. too tired to lvl up a skill using skill points? let me guess hes going to forget about it again?

Thanks for the Chapter Killing a queen didn't get any EXP for MC?! Usually killing a strong monster such as Elite or boss has additional EXP Again a Noob Author Trying to write something that don't know about it

I don't know if his stupid or ignorant cause he din't loot the nest of the demonic bunnies!!!!!!

Author you're too bad at writing to be taking on a system novel... This is seriously garbage

ok dude you are doing a pretty good book but your interactions are a little bit behind he needs to interact with his family to tell them about the AI system, titles and hidden stats and also you are making them as if they are robots anyways keep up the good work

MC IQ is worse than ash ketchup..

Can I volunteer to edit this novel? Form my own point of view, this novel actually has a great potential and I would like to proofread it. Give me a reply if you want my service. I'm not an expert but I can help you. And what's wrong with demonic rabbit? I love rabbits! Cats and dogs! And you actually eliminated all the fluffy rabbits! Huhuhu! Joke 😂

its seem author didn't write it with full heart??~ I mean, usually within cave that has boss class like Rabbit Queen, its should has chest or some treasure within it!!🤦🤦 and that reward?? his lvl should be 13 or 14!! killing that queen should give him at least 1 lvl!!🤦🤦

Reading this repetition of the entire enemy name is like listening to nails on a chalkboard. After a scene has been established and the actors are set you can refer to them in more generic, shorter and diverse terms such as: he, her, foe, enemy, ally. furry bag of xp etc... At the start of a new chapter re-introduce everyone in the intro and also re-establish identities if new actors enter other than that be more inventive. If you repeat the same word more than once or twice within several paragraphs of each other you are writing wrong.

Because im tired i will level up you tomorrow such a stupidity

trash novel from a noob author! he doesnt even know the essence of leveling up novels, just look at the jump on exp from lvl 2 to lvl 10 fucking retard

Почему не проверил гнездо на наличие ништяков у босса...

Imagine this: Everyone meets up and starts talking about their b@dass titleslije Overcome, Limitbreaker, godslayer, master hunter and so on. And this our mc comes up and says "I am the Rabbit Slayer" *A moment of silence before we laugh our ar$e off at him please* I'd rather be called Chicken Butcherer than that....

Tks Chapt

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