Reviews of Megalopolis (on hold- indefinitely)

Hey there everyone, this is my first novel, I hope you all enjoy it. Any communication with me can be done here or after each chapter, I’ll try to respond 😁 I’m open to suggestions/feedback/critique, but as I have a fairly developed idea of what the world will look like I might not be able to include or incorporate some things.

Good old lenghty paragraph that I like. This story is pretty nice. As for the update it's meh but I understand your situation. That world have a lot of potential, and it is a nice idea to begin with a slave. Keep it up, I'm waiting for your next chapters 👍