For people who complain that the narratives in this story are too long, you do not understand the beauty of this novel. The long and detailed narratives which do not make you laugh out loud or pump your blood up is precisely what makes this story good. Instead this story serves to pull you into the story, focusing on every word and just filling your mind with sheer curiosity. If this was a book rather than a webnovel, I would have been one of the first to buy it. However, this is precisely why I am not willing to pick this novel up further. It is still in its early stages and it might have some amazing plotlines in the future once the story has progressed. But this type of story is not suitable for webnovel reading. When I search for webnovels, I search precisely for those blood pumping humurous stories which have a swashbuckling novels who seem to defy the Heavens. If I have to give an example, I would not read Lord of the rings with one chapter a day and rather finish the entire book at one go in the comfort of my bed with a hot chocolate in my hand enjoying the rain outside.
Hi ! I found a lot of authors in wich english is not their native language and so am I. It gives me a lot confidence in writing a story here on this platform by knowing you all are doing your best, why not me? Just continue like that and one day you will be proud of your first story even though you may make a lot of mistakes here and there but you will eventually improve with the support of the others readers. So go for it!
Now I will admit, so far I have only read 5 chapters. Normally I would've read more before leaving a review as books take a while to get good but not this one. This one was good enough to do now. I'm honestly really enjoying the novel and will definitely recommend to anyone who wants to read. The writing style is good, the uploads are consistent and descriptions are on point. I don't think I need to say any more. read for yourself and find out.
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