Hello guys! This is my first time writing a novel and I really appreciate all the support! Thank you for always reading. Please continue to do so. I'll try my best to make a new chapter everyday. Also shamelessly putting a five star review.......hehehehehe hope you don't mind \(o｡o;
Interesting novel so far, I hope the mc is going to work his way up through the military and avenge his bloodline, it just started so there’s not much to go off of but this novel seems promising!
Nice story. I like it! Keep up the good work. I just noticed some things that might help you. First, you must build a world background introducing the world of your novel to the audience. The look of the world of Cray, the era and some other thing. I guess you know what I'm saying. You must also try some proofreading especially the grammar and punctuation errors. Despite these. Your work is a good read. The story is gripping. Keep it up. Good luck
Nada contra!!! Apenas liberi mais capítulos" pois é difícil avaliar apenas com 3 capítulo!!! Enfim... Quando tiver 20 capítulos eu volto a avaliar... 140 caracteres... 140 caracteres... 140 caracteres... 140 caracteres... 140 caracteres... 140 caracteres...
A great fantasy story with a wealth of character development. At this point in time the Power System and abilities are still unclear however the story is intriguing and engaging. I Finished all available chapters in two days. Looking forward for more content in order to be able to give a concise review.
thanks the story has gone well and the characters have good names this is a great story and thanks for making the story it is so awesome and thanks for the story
thank you this story is super great the characters have some awesome names and please have a very great luck on making chapters and i want more chapters
I'm not yet to read the story, gotta start hehehehe oh by the way I like the front pic than last time. Thank you. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's very interesting! I love it! YEahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
The story is really good. Want to know why? Read and see it for yourself! The story gets better and better as it continues and all of the foreshadowing was so good.
this sounds pretty promising!...... as an original work, its pretty good for me.......let's see what will the MC do in the future.......😆👍
This story is really good! The mysterious vibe that I get somehow grabs the attention of readers. sgkldghehfo;qajeo;fja;oejg;ajegjqapegjsjg;jaeg;aoejg;aejf;jselgl;aejg
This is really good! Specially the daily updates. The story so far is good, even the plot is moving along just fine. 140 WORDS BLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHBALHABLAHHBALBALHABLAHBAL
It's very good! The story is progressing at a steady pace and the updates are daily! However at the beginning I was confused about the povs because it suddenly changes, but recently it's been improving. Hoping for more chapterssssssss
Nice story. It is so interesting to read because it is not common especially that it was an original story. I think everyone should read it for a start.
Quite a fast paced story yet the overall plot currently is going pretty well. I await for the incoming action to boost more excitement into the story. Just watch out for the grammatical errors and such and you'll be fine.
2 CHAPTERS, VERY LONG FOR EXPECTATIONS, BUT IT SEEMS TO BE GOOD, but may come as a surprise, so I'll follow another story about reincarnation
Only 2 chapters but hell this is good --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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