The Chronicles of the Immortal God

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Very good story made me laugh alot characters are well made um what else do i put here man i suck at making review why did i even try sigh is this 140 characters yet

First of all, it’s been dropped. It’s pretty funny a the start but It gets dragged on more and more each arc which gets boring. The multiple POVs aren’t well written especially when the MC isn’t actually the MC but his master according to how much the author spends time writing in the master’s POV. I was pretty disappointed as I wanted to see mc grow but the pace of the story was so slow he didn’t do much if anything at all after 100 ch. conclusion, 80% is centred around the master e.g. limelight, women, funny parts and POV, 10% is fang yu, 5% in fang lin (the MC) and the other 5% are the other characters.

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read until the 20th chapter so no spoiler. interesting idea and bad realization is what characterize this novel for me, I mean i understand it's a very interesting idea to have 2 entity of different *** in the same consciousness but gosh. am I the only one not finding the joke funny and instead heavy ? Plus why by the seven hell would you skip the F*****G first batle of the protagonist ????????? it's one of the key moments of the story ! how is he gonna fight, because yeah when i see "immortal" in the title and it talks about cultivation i hope that there will be battles. not to arrange the case, wtf is wrong author ? do you re-read what you wrote ? I quote "[..]He then smiled as he caressed his forehead. He can clearly feel his strength trickling a little with the unlocking of the first petal. He cheerfully said, [...]." chapter 4 on the 4th paragraph ... why are you jumping to present the back to past and you may be thinking <you just took the worst phrase in the 20 chapters after searching carefully> and the answer is NO. (it would make a too long critic to list all the spelling and gramatical error (which i do not pretend to be abstained from)) now the world case, because yeah the issue above tackle the writing quality, the story development, and with character only good at pun, which are not funny I repeat just ... bad ( it's not even ***ist you kinda feel it want's to be funny but doesn't manage to and end up just being lame and heavy) the character design is also a bad point. on to the world design we were saying, right ? well, it described in three paragraphs, furthermore a dense part about the sect and power distribution WHICH IS IMPORTANT is being push at us like a hot potato and the author expect us to be like "uh ok i perfectly remember all of what you said and wont be lost for the next few paragraphs" anyway this is just my point of view on the story i understand if you don't have the same and maybe I'll read until 30% to see if it's better than what I thought (all my brave support to those hating the novel like me, but who read further).

The author keep adding fillers and dragging story for too long in each arc. Everything becomes more mess. Running story in parallel and left with cliffhanger and switch. This novel has potential but no longer in my opinion. There are lots of typos. when it becomes premium, there are more fillers. Each chapter is too expensive.

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Everything is amazing the background of characters the pacing isn't drawn too out but isn't super rushed although there are few times where words are repeated when they shouldn't (could be me being dumb sometimes) but overall highly recommend reading it

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This story is acceptable, the humour is alright. Despite switching POV many times the flow of the story is not impeded. While there is perversion and not a lot of depth it is still worth a read.

Better than most original novels. The release rate is stable and there are no long pauses, so it’s easier to follow the story and not forget it. Actually it’s pretty outstanding that it has a more stable release rate than 90% of translated novels here. I mean it’s not working on someone else’s work but writing it. So yeah, good read. Oh and I’m happy that Wang Hao finally got what he deserves, hope to see less of him as his character is somewhat of a dick.

One of d best stories I have read till now: mind blowing: 💚💛💙❤💙💛💙 The characters of the story r superb It's like I really went into another world wid them: Aweshomeeee

a refreshing read with a dedicated author. - the story is not self centered around one MC but several. - characters are not "vase" ready to be smashed and replaced. - the passing is slow, you may like it or not. -the story have it's own charm and dosn't rely on cliché -some funny moments -many cliffhanger due to the change between different character POV -give it a try if you want to know more

Comedy and lewd scenes are very forced and over the top, and the author picks and pulls from many different novels of which most seem to be from novels by Er Gen. The author could definitely benefit from a proofreader and an editor to help each chapter flow more naturally. So far this seems like a fan fiction rather than an original novel.

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Boi, this is a great piece I found. I'm going to push the power stones here!

Well, I just made this account to write a review here. I liked the concept, especially the multiple viewpoints. The one thing I did not like was Fang Lin suffering and Fang Yu 'gaining'? Anyway, author, please make Wang Hao suffer from time to time ok?

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