Reviews of I Didn't Even Want to Live, But God Forced Me to Reincarnate!
I Didn't Even Want to Live, But God Forced Me to Reincarnate!
LynneSuzuran
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Hello, everyone! I'm the author of this story and after seeing how other authors wrote their own reviews and used it as information board or place where you all can share your thoughts in case you don't want to write a review. ***General Information*** - I won't drop the series mid-way! - I will regularly update the story, so you will always have chapter(s) to read per week. - The story is quite a slow-paced one. - Curious of the tags? Let me give you some that I can think of: Fantasy, Slice of Life, Comedy, Drama, Psychological, Reincarnation, Female Protagonist, Age Progression, Sword and Magic. - I also publish this story in other platforms, all under the same pen name, but expect the numbering and parting to be quite different from the other platforms, as in this webnovel platform, I set the maximum chapter length to be around 2000 words, with 1000+ words as the average chapter length here. - I love Japanese novels, so expect that this story will get influences from them, i.e. the style of the writing. ====================================== ***Story Overview*** If you want to know what to look forward to and don't mind to get some possible spoilers, continue to read these points, but if you want your life to be full of surprises, jump to continue reading my thoughts and comments after the "=====" line. - This story will start out as Slice of Life that focuses on the MC's new life, how she can come to terms with her forced reincarnation, and try to learn about her new life as she tries to break free from the chains of her past life. I want to give the feeling of growing up together with the MC to the readers. The conflicts she faced early on might be small, but it would gradually turn into bigger issues. As of now, the issues she faced might be quite trivial (like how she had to face her past self's acquaintances and family members; and tried to hide the fact that she's reincarnated). - Will this remain a relaxed Slice of Life (SoL)? The answer is no. I have conflicts and actions ready in the future for our MC, but I want to let her grow up in character before throwing her off to face the bigger issues planned for her. However, I won't abandon the SoL aspect, as there will be SoL chapters even amidst the conflicts. - Lastly or TL:DR, I want you all to really feel and experience the life of our MC here, and not just read through all the conflicts and how she might be able to handle all of them, or just shoving off some actions to wow you. It might be the contributing factor to the slow pacing this story has. Hopefully, you will be able to experience the life that the MC has in this story and feel more connected to the world of this story! ====================================== ***My Thoughts and Comments*** - Thank you for reading my story. I would be really glad if you are enjoying the story I'm writing. I hope I can continue to make this story better and that it won't disappoint you in the end ^^ - Don't hesitate if you want to drop some comments or point out if I made typos, I would really appreciate that! - I really appreciate all the supports you give towards this story (comments, votes/powerstones, etc). They will all be my motivation to keep this story going and to make the story better. I think that's all, and in case this review can't be edited and I would like to add anything, I will write it in this review's reply. I hope this review can get my thoughts crossed out to you guys about the story I'm writing. Oh, also... I'm giving five stars to my own story for a personal goal to make this story as good as possible! And my last word would be : thank you very much!
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**Review from Chapter 1 to 26** This novel is about Reinst who hated her life because her family is disappointed by her gender, weak mana, and dark attribute. In short, no one loves her so she just decided to become a cell donor to at least be helpful after she dies. Coincidentally, she dies later on that same day by a... meteorite (sponsored by God's idiocy). Reinst then reincarnated 7 years later as Lyra. She finally experiences the wonderful love of a family but she still has her fears because of her past life. She also gets troubled as she meets people she knew as Reinst especially her half-brother who got suspicious of her. I Didn't Even Want to Live, But God Forced Me to Reincarnate! (phew) is another reincarnation cliché novel but it has its own twists. It's really interesting and has its humor. I recommend readers trying this! I'm only having problems with info-dumps. The info-dumps are either (1) unnecessary, it's not really important to the plot (2) necessary but it's like a storm that points out all the infos in one shot. I might need the info given out but I don't need it now nor everything of it all at once. For example: the infos about different races. Apart from that, the author is doing really great! I'm looking forward to the chapters and your improvement! Good luck and have fun! (^_^)/
The story is just phenomenal: serious yet in another sense comedic The author uniquely twists the desire of death and pain into one of life and healing; although I am not sure how long this feeling will last because sometimes there will be a problem that wants to ruin that character's happiness The mixture of different ideals and culture provides the reader with a good sense of imagery, why her first mother did not love her, or the need for a male heir; that which correlated with problems in the real world I like the variation that the author chooses for her magic, and I think it is wonderfully interesting. I would love if I could read more story, and I believe the author-sama will continue to surprise me! P.S this is not the final review, because change is near every corner!
90% (didn't actually do the math) of the reincarnation stories have little to do with where they came from. It is simply used to explain why they act a certain way while in this story it's a very important part and affects the story. I also enjoy the change of pace when you have a female main character. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more chapters coming soon!!!
A hidden gem among originals, quite well-written. While the language and prose could be better, the sheer heart and emotional value in the story itself is worth keeping this one in my library. The world-setting is remarkably detailed even from early on, and the systems involved are more complex than I'd expected. At this early point of the story where I'm at, there's not a lot of talk about the characters around the MC, yet despite the brevity, there's already a strong showing of what is at the hearts of these people. Although the start might seem a bit slow, I appreciate the style, the quirkiness, and the personalities of the characters that show through the writing. My applause to the start of a much more wholesome story on webnovel than most, and to hoping it would do well.
This is the story of a girl that is playing the best '2-pair' (Certainly not the best, but far from the worst) hand that was dealt to her considering she wasn't allowed to fold. With a loving family and seemingly ordinary blessing, this reincarnation into the same world, but very different house shows undeniable heart. The world building is one of the strongest aspects of this novel. You are taken for the same ride as the young girl we follow through all the twist, turns, and delightful misunderstandings that we can all enjoy while smiling wryly while knowing all the major crises (At least in her childhood) are adorable little bumps in the road. One cannot help but wonder how our main character, her brother, and her entire family will continue to grow even at this early stage. The pacing of the story is indeed extremely slow, but why would you need high adventure when to a child, offending that brat of a Prince is just as major as facing a hundred foes? As for the author's style, 'developing' is the best term. One can easily see the tweaks and adjustments made to the style as the author goes. There is clearly room for improvement, but since the author is going without an editor (I assume) these things will only improve with time, practice, and carefully thought out criticism from the reader base. That's not to say it's bad, on the contrary, especially when making the thoughts of a little girl come alive in your head, I can almost see the manga pages draw themselves in many places. I commend the author for the stability in their updates and am looking forward to reading this story more and more, which I hope can be taken as my highest of praise. My only advice is keep writing and keep honing yourself. You have a gift for story telling, so please tell your story.
This is the best SoL novel I read! The world building and connecting the emotions of the various family members of the MC in combination with the growth of the character is amazing! It is a really unique novel and the first novel I give a complete 5 stars and totally mean it. Because it is absolutely captivating! Keep up the good work, and when it comes to the major events in the future, please try to keep the MC with a healthy and positive mindset, because her past life already was quite depressing enough. Thank you for the consideration.
Warning: Because I rate books on whether there are any FLAWS, this book gets a full 5 stars. I've only read 13 chapters so far and while there is little plot so far, I find the grammar and writing fluent high in quality. There's a dash of humor although I'm not going to be bold enough to say that it is a comedy. One issue is that there is an info dump a few chapters in. Several times as a matter of fact, about the magic of the world and family history and a few more. Other than that, a good story so far.
