Reviews of Tarros
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Good start so far! Even though it’s only a chapter the set up is intriguing enough to garner attention! Good luck on your novel, hopefully everything goes as plan. Also, for your 3rd language, there was less gramatical errors than the average native English speaker lol. Minor fluidity and grammar mistakes but nothing a proofreader can’t fix!
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*Remember this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: Good plot, but can't really determine whether this is a story I'll enjoy based only on these chapters, feels like some of these chapters would work better as prologue chaps, (not the first,) However, since I haven't read that far, I can't say that with certainty.;,;. Also your world background does not make much sense to me, I understand the background of the game well enough to understand that's the world that seems more important to this novel, but I feel that both worlds are still lacking by a great amount. Positive Feedback: Good plot line and nice reactions.;,;. haven't noticed any grammatical errors nor fluency errors.;,;. Personal Feedback: I know not yet whether I will enjoy this book, but for those who will enjoy this story, it seems like it will be a good read. I will continue reading this at another time, and may or may not finish. Please, though, finish what you started here for your fans' sakes (or to spite the haters).;,;.
The writing is a lil' bit confusing at some parts but nothing dramatic. The story development is confusing as there isn't a clear line between the past, present and future. And the story transition between different event whithout been clear on what it's happening but maybe it's intended? but the result is that we don't know what's happening and what the author want's us to understand. Anyway, can't say much about the characters as i don't have much data but the MC seems like a good guy (except for the killing of billions of people). The world background looks promising. Earth disaster by global climate changing and a Virtual Game to save it... looking forward it. keep going on!
A novel with a solid plot. Starts out pretty cliche but manages to distinguish itself from other novels of it's trope after a few chapters. Though the grammar and punctuation would need a bit of improvement. You'll find some sentences awkward to read, but the rest of the story is done well. It just requires a bit of polishing. Cheers!
The novel needs some serious editing. The flow is broken in many places, and the grammar dissuades me from reading (my mind can only do so many auto-corrects before it gets tired). The weekly release rate amounts to whatever the author pleases. So far the depth of the characters is very superficial. They feel more like plot devices than actual living people. The only thing I can feel the author has put some serious effort is into trying to make us understand the struggle the world is going through. Overall a 2.4/5 according to Qi's standards.
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