The world background is not so bad, but everything is going to fast. The mc became extremely powerful in like 15 chap. he is not op like in other novel but development is way to fast for me. But this is not the worst... i’m not realy good at english (i m french), but the writing quality is crap even i can see how terrible it is and i can’t take it anymore (there is more than one mistacke every sentence...). So yeah this novel need editing and it will be ok, or at least passable.
