Reviews of Nameless
Nameless
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Hi, author here. I thought it would be a good idea to give a review about the story. Nameless is a story about hardship, hope and sacrifice. All in all its about people who have been enslaved for 8000 years. Its about their fight. This story has multiple protagonists. So there might be some jumps in perspectives. Each chapter title would have the characters name appended to it. I tend to lean towards the western side of the fantasy while grabbing the jewels of eastern fantasy. So expect a mixture of these two writing styles. Finally the release rate. I would try to hit 10 chapters/week. But as I am writing on the go and getting used to this new system. Release rate might vary. But I would make sure that you would get your daily dose of the chapters. Thank you for your support. Hope you enjoy the story.
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where are you "the grammar police"? since the lowly me cannot find grammar mistakes. so please contribute for a much fun ride. since after so long i have finally found something that i like. thanking in advance😆😆😆 word count is less than 140😢😢😢 word count is less than 140😢😢😢 word count is less than 140😢😢😢 word count is less than 140😢😢😢 word count is less than 140😢😢😆 word count is less than 140😢😢😢
The author really have a creative inspiration. You'll see (read i mean) a new kind of world, a new kind of power, a new kind of monster, and a lot of original idea that you never imagined. It just the author still need more experience in writing, so he can do a better story telling of his amazing imagination.
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This is specifically for this chapter, i haven't read any further yet but the build up from chapter 1 to this makes me really sad. It's poorly written. First you use a lot of pronouns e.g. (he, his) and this makes it extremely confusing on who you are referring it to and because of this, sentences don't flow. Just read the first paragraph. Half the time, I was just trying to make out what was happening, I had to read back after reading for a while to realise that the main character was talking to his rod. We have no idea why but it somehow works to get his brother to talk about something which we have no idea about. The first chapter and this chapter just don't link together. I don't know but chapter 2 to me is a duplicate of chapter 1, just read the comments, they say it too. Maybe that's the reason I can't link this chapter, who knows. Back on topic, the conversations make me slightly angry, referring to the rod as 'wood' instead of say 'wooden stick' makes them look extremely unintellectual. If you are trying to make the younger brother look dumb, congrats! But id still prefer if he could say wooden stick instead of wood. Furthermore spelling mistakes such as 'should' instead of 'shoulder'. First impressions mean alot in novels.
