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Kiiara
KiiaraLv11Kiiara

Woww love this story! The beginning is already interesting and the concept of city underwater is really great. Love your description of it. So I think for writing wise, you’re already fine. Ohh how, I wish she imagine herself as mermaid though lol but now it’s already intriguing as well how she chooses not to be an angelic figure or sth. And oh dear, did u draw the cover urself? Because I see the MC has the same features as the drawing of your cover. If u did draw it, you have an amazing hand love! 👍🏻 Keep up the good work author! I’ll be around for next chapters! 😁

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BaeVida
BaeVidaLv14BaeVida

Nice story. Simplified synopsis. No the usual rebirth, transmigration or gaming story. Its different, she became a goddess in another realm and had power to create anything... Three chapters in and I like it, good work author... Keep it up.

RenuKakkar
RenuKakkarLv5RenuKakkar

I read all the chapters that you have posted so far. I find the story original and interesting. The plot is developing well. Writing quality is good. I cannot say much about the stability of updates but, by the look of things here, it will be good too. Character design is good. So far characters are in the making. World background is equally good. All the best!

Erza18
Erza18Lv11Erza18

Wow..the story is so intriguing. The early chapters pique my interest. It has unique element. The story is good at the very start. Looking forward to the adventure of Astra and Eos. Keep it up author. You have a nicr story in mind. Hope to have more chapters. PLEASE update more. Thank you

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken

How interesting, a very well written take on the isekai genre. Only 4 chapters in and I can see the care that's clearly put into this. Would like to see more. Short critique. Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another pass won't fix. Dialogue feels realistic and prose flows naturally. Good show. 👍

bunnyreadsabook
bunnyreadsabookLv4bunnyreadsabook

This is a good story with a unique premise I haven't read before. You captured the MC's thoughts and feelings very well, especially in the first two chapters. I also enjoy the creative world-building and how you do a good job of introducing both the MC and other adjacent characters. My only critiques are with the grammar, particularly for quotations and capitalizing words that shouldn't be capitalized. I also hope that the stakes for this story are introduced soon so that the story adopts more purpose.