1 Plus Ultra Story Update/Overhaul!
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Hey! It's been quite a while since the end of this story! With the release of the Sequel PLUS a Dragon Ball story that I'm working on, I've read through it quite a few times, with that being said I've decided that it needs a looooot more before I can feel comfortable with calling it somewhat of a quality read. These will have minor spoilers, but nothing towards the plot of the story, just some abilities and whatnot. So, here's a brief list to some of the changes coming to this story!
1.) The U.A. Entrance Exam WILL be featured in the beginning chapters of this story instead of being written off as Leonidus not attending them due to All Might and his Father.
2.) The 1st Year, 2nd Year, AND 3rd Year Hero Work Studies will have more chapters added to them instead of just a couple. I feel that it is lazy of me to just write 2 of those chapters, do a timeskip, then call it good.
3.) MORE EMPHASIS ON KAMADO BLOODLINE! Reading through, it's rather idiotic that I introduce Total Concentration Breathing plus the Breathing Style(s) to Leonidus only for him to use it for one or two chapters, then have it be completely ignored until however many chapters later.
4.) Demon Form AND Rage Quirk Chapters will also be added! Exploring more into these two topics should've happened but they rarely did, albeit the main Quirk for Leonidus is his Overdrive.
5.) More moments with not so much used characters. There's a lot of things I missed out one, one huge thing was the interactions between many of Class A and B with Leonidus.
6.) Introducing a new character during the 1st Year Work Studies, Kasai Rengoku, the set of chapters that come out for the 1st Year Work Studies will have some parallels with the Infinity Train Arc from Demon Slayer.
7.) Redoing most of the written dialogue in some chapters and adding things into chapters 1900 words or less. My goal is to get those chapters to at least 2500-3000+ words.
8.) Readjusting the Universal Hero Tournament Arc, although it is cool, it feels waaaaay to much like the T.O.P. from Dragon Ball Super, not to mention the new characters are practically ripoffs from the main enemies. Those will be changed heavily!
9.) Power Scaling will be changed as well! Most fights will go differently instead of having Leonidus get slapped around in one fight then dominate in the other.
10.) Possible implement of "Trigger Warning" on the later chapters as they heavily deal with depression, suicide, etc. I will let you all decide on that one!
11.) Including more on U.A.'s experiments on Alyx Leonidus. It's a little dull that I only briefly mention the topic in some chapters instead of actually cover it every now and then.
12.) Quartet Girls Content. Simply put, I actually forgot I wrote them into my story after a while! I'll be posting more chapters with them involved as well!
13.) Chapters involving a key character going Quirkless will be extended! Having more of them instead of just two would be a lot better for the story instead of just jumping ship two chapters later and giving their Quirk back.
That's all for this quick little update! I will be doing all of this over time (or maybe in just a few days, depending on my schedule) to make this story much better! Those who read beyond this point, feel free to stop by and re-read it again once I've added those chapters/made readjustments! Without your feedback, this wouldn't be happening! Thank you all for reading!
