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AtsukiJoou
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How do I say this.... um... this is close to real texts I've read than a light read. The world-building is amazing and the characters too. I can see that this is not the usual stories that we read here in WN, but it has potential!! The story is deep and the portrayal of characters is beautifully done. I hope you continue writing, just know that, you have taken a hard path! Thank you for your hard work~

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The_Procrastinator
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raghad04
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This story holds a whirlpool of emotions. The way the Author expressed the characters is great! On top of that it's fantasy! I love magical stuff and the more you read the better the story gets!! Author amazing work! keep writing!!!❤

Dalexia
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This is an excellent start to a complex, magical world. The characters are full of depth and I love the world building. The structure of the story is very detailed.

clydieM
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Hi Author! I’ve read the first 7 chapters and I’m loving it. I like the world background and the characters as well. I didn’t notice a grammatical error. Keep it up Author!