Chuck45Single
This was a great book! The only thing that got to me were the quite long paragraphs and when dialogs weren't on their own. The characters feel like string leads and their journey has just begun I cri! Other than the small critique, it's a great read and honestly something I will pick up again when there's more chapters! โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Hi, im not good in doing comment reviews so I'll just sum up my overall preview of your story. The story is very interesting, the way how you write the book inspire's me to follow the same format and the way how you develop the characters is great. The only thing I noticed is that sometimes the story is pretty predictable, try adding more story twist even though you are just in the early chapter so that there will be many "WOW" moments for the readers. THANK YOU
The amazingly written story around Kaz. Although it was shocking to know that the story started with MC getting drowned. It was interesting, while at the same time, keep making you want to read the next chapter. The story somehow made me went google even more, especially since my mind is questioning about the identity of Alga Lucidus.
Thanks Author for this story. Nice setup on the 3 characters. So this method is time story dimention pulling the readers back and forth leaving the readers to figure out the next thing mich like watching a movie and anticipating whatโs next. Look forward to see how Cameron would react after discovering what happen between Sonny and Kaz. They say a merman/mermaidโs first kiss / first love last forever thatโs one angle to explore. i enjoy reading the book. well done and keep up the good work โญ๏ธ