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Great story and the grammar seems good to me. it has the potential to go a long way if the writer does not drop it. Keep it up!

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I havent read this and the story can be pure ass but I saw a no harem tag which earns you a 5 star. Way too many harem fanfics with garbage execution.

Great story so far. The writing quality is really good and the story is interesting although the mc is getting overpowered too fast. Hope you explore the romance part more in the future when he is older. Is this a harem? Because it says in the tags no harem but you gave some indications to Shizume and Tsunade as romantic partners.

You know I kinda like this fanfic, but can someone here recommend me a Naruto fanfic where Rin Nohara is the Heroine. Cause' it's like they focus on Mei Tsunade and girls in Konoha 11, I just kinda want something different and also Rin's character isn't much tackled in a fanfic.

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this is a good novel and I hope you keep updating it .

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this fic is 👌 i cant even desribe how good this is definitely not your typical naruto fanfic author is changing it up and i love it. highly recommend

what's the name of this novel again, people who might want to read it can't since they forgot the name.

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I recommend reading before deciding if you want to continue! The only problem is the update stability, but that will not make me lower this from a 5/5 fanfic. Thanks for the great work Author!

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very good book it's a nice read has very good grammar nothing really wrong with it I recommend reading it ttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

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