Review

Webnovel doesn't seem to change that much and the system gets worse and worse each month. Since I couldn't post my review in ACTUAL reviews, I decided to place it here :)

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It's my first fanfic, so I give it 4 stars!

I will try to write a coherent review so that you will be engaged to read my story. First of all, no harem, sorry not sorry. Nagato and Harem? Sound like trouble.

[Writing Quality]

I consider myself a decent writer, at least by wn standards, though I do make some mistakes here and there. The story is fast-paced and I believe it will end in like 70 chapters. So, if you like slow-paced stories, this is not for you.

[Stability]

I post every day and the length of the chapters doesn't differ too much. It stays at somewhere around 1100 words. Perhaps I will also open up a P4treon with 10 chapters ahead of the schedule.

[Story Development]

Well, what can I say, It's Nagato(before talk no Jutsu) in Marvel Stories. He has a certain goal, which I will not spoil. Go and read to find out :)

[Character Design]

I think it's my weakest point, though I do hope I managed to convey the characters through text. If you have any suggestions on how to alter certain points in their emotions or smth else, feel free to contact me.

[World Background]

Indeed. Nothing to say on this one.

I do warn everyone that this story isn't for everyone.

I also want to kindly ask you not to spam any reviews whether they are good or bad. They are just annoying and get on my nerves.

Warning: If your comment includes any curse words, then it's automatically deleted by the system. It's not me!

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