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Just an author critiquing his work correctly, this is my first novel and If there are mistakes just tell me, This is inspiration from “Becoming A Kpop idol” when i saw that there were no new chapters, i wrote this to entertain myself

Ok so I’m finding it pretty good so far as a chill read go just cool off from other books and the grammar is actually good, same for the spelling and although it is going a bit too fast for my liking I feel that it can go places! I will of course add it to my library 😀

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