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This relationship reminds me of one where the same thing happens but in another perspective, where an adventurer finds a demon but as a child, he takes care of her as his daughter, he grows up, as a father, all the things he can give up to exaggeration, when he is already almost 17 years or less, she confesses to the one who is supposedly her adoptive father, first she does not accept her, but after circumstances, she manages to accept her, the story continues, where she has to save her from the demonslord, who want to kill her because she is the heir of the strongest demonlord, he has to kill, but in the end he stops when his now-girlfriend daughter, returns, advances the story, where they have children, also makes him their blood servant because if he had not already died as a human being . finish.

This is new. Instead of transmigration, the girl actually travel through portals. Writing style wise, author did a great job and I absolutely love the characters, esp the girl 😂 she is such a cutie and so innocent. Oh, I don’t think the first 9 chapters r unimportant. They actually strengthen the bond between two characters n fill in the gap for their bg. Anyway, keep up the good work author!

This is a great refreshing novel to read I loved it! It has cultivation, slice of life and funny too The english here is very good and i enjoyed reading it I hope u continue writing it on faster base I want to read mooooore.

Contrary to what you may think, your writing is leagues above the majority of fiction written across the various fiction sites available. Grammar has minimal errors and the story is paced well enough for the genre. Will be looking forward for more when a few dozen chapters get uploaded.

Terrible.