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I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *), then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.
At time of reading (38 chapters). this story is getting better each chapter. highly recommended. this book is fast and has mistakes at the start but recent chapters are fire 🔥 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Okay so when I read the first chapter, I noticed a punctuation errors in which you would put comma's instead of full stops so I think you should watch out for punctuation errors. Also, there are times when some words are capitalised, but they shouldn't so watch out for that too. I suggest using Grammarly as it helps with punctuation and grammar (I use it too). Also, the fact that it's your first time writing a novel is impressive, because the way you write is quite descriptive and I love that because it makes me picture what I'm reading. Overall, the novel has an interesting plot so just work on your grammar and punctuation and you'll be okay. Good luck 😊