This really good but you should go more into the depth of Chris's life! I would like to see more of his home life or how he is at school, or with people at school, etc. Really great work though! The writing is pretty good.
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This updates so much I'm hooked but look through your chapters theres a few typhos! Love the story though and Chris's and Kaylas relatioship is so cute