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Reviews of ⁉ Mysteries Awaits ⁉ [A TBHK/JSHK x Reader Fanfiction]

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⁉ Mysteries Awaits ⁉ [A TBHK/JSHK x Reader Fanfiction]

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  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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Megaweebnerd
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This is definitely one of the better fanfics that I've read for this anime and I would definitely recommend it. The writing quality is good, I usually would have found a few mistakes on each chapter but this has little to any mistakes. Since it only has the introduction and the first two chapters it's hard to judge the story devolopment but I'll update my review when the story is hopefully finished. I only took a star off for character design because the author changed Yashiros character but explained that it was for the story and I'm interested where it will go. It hasn't been updated in four months but I under stand that the author has a life of their own and it can take a while to find motivation to write. They did really well with the world, even doing a bit of research when Japanese school begins and touches a bit on honorifics. The abusive back story seemed a bit steriotypical at first however I am interested where the uncles character will go and if we will get to see a bit more of him. Overall hood work and please keep writing because you can know that you have at least one devoted fan.

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Kitsune_8275
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This is pretty good so far, I really love it. I can't wait to read more. I think that it will just get better and better every update. Currently, the novel sounds amazing and I'm excited to see how it develops.