Reviews of [The System] is Awake
[The System] is Awake
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Hello Peoples! Author here *awkward wave* just wanted to say that this is not the best book you would want to read here. (There are so many talented people on this site honestly!) I'm not a pro at all, so please give me your constructive criticism! I'm trying to make this a long term project to improve my awesome (terrible) writing skills! Thanks for checking out this random book! [ Please Try Your Best Reading This Book! ]
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the story so far is interesting, it is going smoothly, but you haven't intreduced any mc yet, personally i would prefer a male antagonst who doasn(t give a **** about others, and use them as a stepping stone for his gowls, someone who follow hs own desires, and of cours he should not always go the lone wolf life style, socialising is important, and if you chose my description as a base for the mc then try not to make him emotionneless or too emotional or a se!x obssessed guy
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