A Primordial Gave Us A Broken Magic System
Stories are told about the days of old when The Primordial Zynovia walked the land of man. He granted broken aspects of his power to those he found amusing, but these powers were so broken they only made things worse.
Zynovia nu Zabek, the walking natural disaster.
The legends say he still sleeps deep below the earth, and his descendants draw his power - but one day - he will return for all that is ours.
at least that is what they tell the children
Our story begins 700 years after he disappeared.
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Okay, just a heads up, the story uses three different POVs (Points of View). You can consider all three characters' "main characters" of course you can choose whoever you like the most.
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Spoiler Alert:
(If you want to learn by reading the novel, stop here; otherwise, keep scrolling)
The Story Uses 3 Power Systems
1) Weapons, Equipment, and Monsters share the same power scaling system.
- Common
- Rare
- Epic
- Legendary
- Artefact
2) The Magic is broken up into two sections
- Fractured Aspect Magic (This has some kind of drawback)
- Perfect Aspect Magic (Keep reading the web novel)
3) You can also gauge the power scaling by looking at each character's unique combat system.
Any feedback is appreciated, good or bad; I want to tell a good story I can be proud of; thank you for reading my first Novel.
p.s. The way I write the story assumes that all the characters in this world only know what they know, so you will only really find out about things when the character naturally gets to that point but rest assured, I already know the story it's just a stylistic choice of storytelling I think works best for this story.
Walley_Wise · Fantasy
