Reviews of [ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!
[ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!
UnknownFate25
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Hello, Author here. Of course I give this five stars, I’m biased. However, After 124 chapters and finishing the first Volume of this book, I think I have a pretty good grasp on this story. If you’re not sure on whether you want to read this book, then here you go- the opinion straight from the Author himself. Get ready to read a lot though, I might accidentally rant 😅 1 - This story is a Fantasy, Action, and Comedy. This means that unlike some other yandere works, it’s not super psychological. There will be yandere moments and character development, but it’s not as psychologically deep. 2 - The MC. If you read the other reviews, you might notice that most of the bad ones have to do with the MC. Except for one review which gives one star, just says “not my cup of tea” and doesn’t explain, like seriously? Anyways, those reviews say that mc is a “beta” and “worst kind of MC” and etc. I just want to say, at the beginning the MC is annoying. That’s true. But that’s on purpose. He’s purposely written that way for his character development. And trust me, at the end of Volume 1, he is a lot different than at the beginning. So if you are reading and the only thing you dislike is the MC, then please continue on. He gets better, I promise. I will admit though his character development does take some time. 3 - A flaw in this story, at least the first Volume, is not all harem characters get appropriate development, due to me focusing on advancing the main story. Volume 2 will focus more on character development on harem members and giving them more “screen-time” so that hopefully you can grow to love them. 4 - There might be (probably are) some grammatical errors, feel free to point them out if you wish. I try to fix them when pointed out. 5 - And I’m the author so keep in mind I am biased :). Anyways, should you have read all of this and decided to read, then thank you. If you decided not to read, okay then.
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Wow. So I randomly stumbled on this while reading, and so far its great! I like yanderes myself so thats also a plus, and I think that the Arcana and Monster systems are really cool and can totally be expanded on. The only thing that made me sorta sad is that the author said to not expect daily updates :(. Shouldve found this when it reached 100+ chaps. Sigh….
As an author myself who prefers to put my time into writing instead of reading this book flips my coins and did a union reverse of my existence because as soon as I start reading I found myself not updating my book for four days straight truly this is a god read on so many levels it reminds me of a book called the novel extra but was written differently, with a different plot, but I this is a really good read to pass the time, and what can I say I see Yandere I click.
I'm not the type to write reviews and I think I have wrote a total of 4 or 5, so I'm not the best either. All I want to say is that this is easily either my favorite or very very close to my favorite novel on this platform. I enjoy it to unhealthy amounts, pretty sure I'll go into a depressive state for about a month after it ends, and that is a thing that I have rarely experienced from reading anything on this platform, so I say with full emotions behind my voice, thank you author, this is amazing
Keep up the great work! Author-san, I know you are really busy, so I really appreciate you putting in the effort to continue this series for us :). I've been following since the beginning, but only now got time to write a review! Writing Quality: Excellent 10/10. Stability of Updates: Has been a little more inconsistent, but the chapters are more than worth the wait. Story Development: Keeps me drawn in and wanting moarrrrr Character Design: Yanderes have actual distinct personalities and aren't just flat "Teehee knife time" characters which is rare World Background: Magic and realms and worlds are all interesting! Keep it up!!!
