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Author Review Commemoration. My first novel I don't know how will this turn out, I just hope that there are people that will enjoy this. I will accept honest criticism but I'm honestly weak against them. If you dislike the novel please criticize in a constructive manner so I know where I could improve. Honestly, this was done out of boredom but I will still do my best to write this.

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It's not because of treating your story badly but it's so boring, the MC is a liability, having all that power and acting very passive, it's just not my cup of tea

Well I just have 1 question, did it hurt when you were dropped? Dropped from the story, dropped from the crib, dropped from the bending machine, dropped from every comment section on web novel this is a joke by the way

Well had read till chapter 15 but checked out just to see that the entirety of Fate/zero arc was removed and the update only included a few changes in the 7th chapter 😥

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I think it's a good fanfiction. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................G3NER4L_LUC1F3R..............

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