Blankiphone
I am going to spare the author from writing down what I would normally do in a review of a work such as this due to the fact that I think they might actually be a young child based on the level of writing exhibited. Nothing in this prologue is very well thought out at all. The scenes and actions are very clunky with no real congruity or realism involved. Author you should let your parents and teachers read your work before posting it in this type venue as the Internet can be a cold dark place that will crush you before you have a chance to develop.