rosella0214
Shameless Author Review :3c After 75 chapters in the book, am finally having the guts to do a shameless self-review! Look forward to the different relationship dynamics of this book and exploring the hidden depths of this book's System. Are you curious? Please read the book! \(@^0^@)/ Need Book Cover made by Me!
read the first couple chapters and while the ideas seem interesting the execution (at least in the first arc) isn't the best in my eyes. hard to read and understand. I think this story would benefit from an editor or just a quick look through to make sure everything is ok. the mc seems interesting but choppy? one minute he's lazy and then me next he's murdering people. one minute he's this master manipulator and then the next he offers to let some dude kill him. IDK maybe things will be cleared up in the later chapters.
This novel had attracted me for a while because of the beautiful cover, but only today I started reading this novel, lol~ I only read the early chapters, so I'll give a review based on what I've read. The first chapter is already so interesting. The tension is real, and the author's way to describe the scenes is majestic. The story developed at the right pace and I enjoyed it. The story is realistic and not too much. Some funny parts balance the whole story. I'll look forward to the story's progress 🥰