The concept is very good. The action part's description is eye-catching. I feel that the chapters are a little short. I wish you will update more chapters to make up for that. Keep writing~
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A pretty good start so far. The characters are a little bland right now, but the action is spectacular. I think the mystery of the world can be good but I also found myself a little confused at some parts. Great job so far tho :)