Nerodith
It was just physically painful for me to read it. Seriously. The idea of the story is not bad, but the author decided to "balance" the actual omnipotence of the protagonist, making it .... her. And this is the main drawback of the work - an absolutely incompetent protagonist who wants to be hit on the head for his absurdity.
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Overall, a pretty decent story. I found the beginning to be a bit slow, but things picked up with the introduction of Yuko and Harri. Actually, I found most of the side characters pretty interesting. In my opinion, the chapters where it's mainly the protagonist monologuing were the weakest ones. There are some clichΓ© elements, but they are sometimes subverted, and there are also some original ideas mixed in. There was also a noticeable improvement in the writing as the story progressed. I'd say that this story is worth a read.
I will give this novel my honest opinion and I don't like it. of course i still rated 4 stars but this novel is nothing for me. If you search for a little "dark" weak willed MC than give it a go. Tbh I dont know what happens in later chapters but this didnt really excite me. All in all I personally don't recommend it but it is just my opinion.
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