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I'm not sure who the author is. There are so many fanfiction writers out there, and without more information, it's difficult to determine the specific author.

It could be about many things. Maybe it's a reimagined version of Ash's adventures in the Sinnoh region. It might feature new characters, new plot twists, or different interpretations of the original story.

One idea could be exploring a different timeline where the Loud siblings have different careers from a young age. For example, Lincoln could be a successful young artist. Another idea is to focus on a mystery within the Loud house, like a hidden room with a family secret. Or you could do a fanfiction where the family goes on an adventure to a magical world that only they can access.

In 'Young Justice Revamped Fanfiction', Kaldur'ahm (Aqualad) is a character full of potential. His complex relationship with his Atlantean heritage and his duties on the surface world can be delved into deeply. Another character is Zatanna. Her magical abilities and her connection to the magical realm can be the center of some great stories. Also, Conner Kent (Superboy) with his journey of self - discovery, from being a clone to finding his own identity as a hero and a person.

One idea could be exploring a new villain from a different dimension who has powers that disrupt the team's usual strategies. Another could be delving into the backstories of some of the lesser - known characters in the Young Justice universe and how they got their powers. Maybe a plot where the team has to deal with a powerful magical artifact that is corrupting the minds of the civilians.

Use unique character development. Instead of following the typical traits of the Loud siblings, give them new hobbies or fears. For example, make Luna afraid of the dark instead of her usual confident self in music. Also, create a complex plot that involves multiple sub - plots. This will keep readers engaged.

My answer didn't involve the specific novel reading website. However, the revision of novel reading websites varied from website to website. Some websites might undergo a major revision while others might maintain the status quo. The disappearance of the readers 'comments section could be due to the different operating models of novel reading websites. On some novel reading websites, the reader's comment section might be used as an interaction method to communicate and discuss with the author and readers. However, on some other novel reading websites, the comment section might be regarded as a kind of advertising platform, and the content displayed would be limited. Therefore, there could be many reasons why the readers 'comments section disappeared. Different websites might have different plans and strategies for the revision of novel reading websites. Some websites may add new categories to better meet the needs of readers. Others might change their operating model to better attract readers and increase revenue. If you want to know more about the revision of the novel reading website, it is recommended to consult the relevant website or the customer service staff of the website.

Writing in Mary Sue is prone to common problems such as exaggeration, unrealistic, and repetitive routines. Here are some suggestions to avoid writing in Mary Sue: 1. Focus on character creation: A good novel needs to have a deep character description so that each character has a unique personality, background, and experience, rather than simply copying the appearance, personality, and experience of others. 2. Avoiding over-reliance on appearance: Although appearance descriptions in novels can attract the attention of readers, over-reliance on appearance descriptions will make the story lack depth and content, which will easily cause readers to have visual fatigue. 3. Pay attention to plot design: The plot is the core of the novel. You need to design an interesting, conflicting, and developing plot instead of simply describing a gorgeous, unrealistic background and the protagonist's luck. 4. avoid over-emphasizing the uniqueness of the protagonist: the uniqueness of the protagonist is easy to cause visual fatigue in the readers. A good novel needs a variety of images of the protagonist to make the readers feel fresh and interested. 5. Pay attention to the use of language: A good novel needs to use appropriate language and rhetorical devices to enhance the novel's expressiveness and emotional resonance, rather than simply using catchphrases and online terms. Pay attention to the integrity and cohesiveness of the story: A good novel needs to maintain the integrity and cohesiveness of the story to avoid contradictions and loopholes in the plot that affect the legibility and cohesiveness of the story. To avoid writing about Mary Sue, one needed to focus on the details and depth of the story from the aspects of character creation, plot design, language use, story integrity, and cohesion to improve the quality and expressiveness of the novel.

The novel tells the story of the protagonist, Lan Ya, who was selected by the mysterious assassin training organization to train for 16 years after her family was destroyed. After graduation, she left the mountain and her first job was to do odd jobs. At the same time, Lan Ya had to politely refuse the high-paying employment of the major assassin organizations because of her background. The plot of this novel is very similar to the one you provided. Both of them involve the training of assassins and meeting female celebrities on the way home. I hope you like my recommendation.😗

😋I recommend the following novels to you. I hope they can help you: [State Breaking Heavenly Pivot]: It was about a young man who came from afar with only a sword and a horse. He thought that he had no hope of cultivating in this life, but he broke through and was reborn. His life began to change. Whether it was the arrangement of fate or the design of man, everything was in the game! Drunken lying against the parasol tree, quickly walking on the clear autumn! "Poison Doctor of the Other World": The protagonist, Qin Tian, has the ultimate skill of medicine and poison, and he struggles to survive in the other world. Although he only wanted to live an ordinary person's life, everything was not as one wished. Reality forced Qin Tian to start the path of a prodigal son that he did not want to walk the most in this foreign world. "The Emperor's Daughter in Troubled Times": The protagonist is an orphan. After being framed, she has to work hard and struggle to survive. Not only was her identity threatened, but she also had to face the framing of evil forces and her own emotional entanglement. I hope you like my recommendations. Muah ~ If you like my recommendations, please feel free to tell me.😗