The fanfic could focus more on character development. In Naruto, the characters grow and change over time. If the fanfic does the same, showing how the characters learn from their experiences and become better or more complex, it would be more appealing. Also, creating more engaging storylines that involve the main themes of Naruto, like the struggle for peace and the importance of bonds, would make it a better read.
One possible reason could be that the fanfic might deviate too much from the original Naruto plot. Fans often have a certain image of the Naruto world in their minds, and if the fanfic changes things drastically, like giving Naruto a completely different personality or changing the power dynamics in a way that doesn't seem right, it can lead to dislike. Another factor could be the writing style. If it's too hard to follow or full of grammar and spelling mistakes, that would put people off.
Yan Bingyun and Shen Wan 'er were characters from the novel " Celebrating Years." Yan Bingyun was a spy sent by the Qing Kingdom to Northern Qi, and Shen Wan 'er was the eldest daughter of Northern Qi. Shen Wan 'er did not know Yan Bingyun's true identity at first, but she gradually fell in love with him. However, Yan Bingyun did not have any sincere feelings for Shen Wan 'er. He was only using her to obtain information about Northern Qi. Even so, Shen Wan 'er's feelings for Yan Bingyun were very deep. There was no clear description of their ending in the literature.
You could try reading other vampire - related books like 'Interview with the Vampire' by Anne Rice. It has a more complex and dark take on vampires. Or 'The Vampire Chronicles' series also by her. Another option is to explore urban fantasy books that don't focus on Twilight - like elements, such as 'The Dresden Files' which has a mix of magic, mystery, and a great main character.
Some might feel this way because the 'Twilight' series has certain elements that can be polarizing. For example, the overly dramatic love story between Bella and Edward might seem cheesy to some. The fanfiction based on it could amplify those aspects that people dislike, like the excessive focus on the vampire - human relationship. Also, the characters' personalities in the original can be seen as one - dimensional by some, and fanfictions may not always improve on that.
There were novels similar to "I Made Everything Up in Naruto"
1: The Moon-Shaped Magician in the World of Beauty and Manic, by Francesca
2."Dragon Ball: I, the Wukong cub, have a combat power of more than 100 million." Author: Rare steak, thank you.
3."Peerless Man, 2.5 Talent, Wanting to Kill the Godking", Author: Sanqian Shui123
4."Starting from Pirates, Pushing Across the World." Author: Yanyun Indra
5."One Piece: I've Become Brother Ming's Brother". Author: The Author Who Wants a Cigarette
6."Douluo: From Diary Writing to Behind-the-Scenes." Author: Liang Yiming
7:"Guru Gojo Doesn't Want to Be a Naruto Koba", Author: Xu Shaoyi
8:"After All, I'm a Villain." Author: I Just Want to Eat
9."The Path of the Lord God Begins from Naruto." Author: Invincible Old Pafai
The following is a detailed introduction of these novels:
1."The Moon-Shaped Magician in the World of Beauty and Manga":
When the Mirror Realm, the reflection of the world where humans usually lived, was wreaking havoc in various universes, Gem Weng pulled Paracelsus down from Heroic Spirit, folded it, and threw it into the Multiverse that had been harmed by the Heroic Spirit.
Superman/Batman/Captain America/Iron Man/Green Lantern: "You're here to save our universe, right?"
Paracelsus smiled and said nothing.
"Right…right?"
The great magician Paracelsus, who was kind, rational, steady, and did not like to fight, shook his head.
"I just want to drain the magic power of your world and send it back to our world."
"This way, we don't have to worry about the Originator drying up!!"
2:"Dragon Ball: My Baby Goku's Combat Power Has Surpassed 100 Million": Sun Wukong: "With my previous life's experience, it's not too much to transform into a Super Saiyan before going down the mountain, right?"
"That bastard Kakarot, why is he always stronger than me?"
Virus,[I will become stronger when I meet someone stronger. My strength is unknown!]
"So Wukong is so handsome when he grows up!"
"Thank you, Buma!"
"Mr. Wukong, here's your document."
Just as Sun Wukong was immersed in enjoying his family life.
His future daughter appeared in a time machine.
"Daddy, I'm your daughter from the future.
Mommy misses you very much.
Someone stole your body and started a massacre in the future world…"
Sun Wukong: "So, I wasn't reborn. It was my soul that traveled through time."
It turned out that he, who had been reborn as Sun Wukong in his previous life, had married Buma and killed Vegeta, who had invaded Earth.
Buma also gave birth to a cute daughter for him.
However, when he fought against Sarroux,
A viral heart disease outbreak, no one to help hold the fort.
There was no time to receive treatment, so he was sacrificed.
In the end, when he woke up again, he returned to this world and became the Saiyan cub Sun Wukong again.
3."Peerless Man, Talent 2.5, Want to Kill the God King": A new story is about to begin. It's a sad song left behind from the previous story.
The Ruler of Gods left behind the legend of seven people becoming gods to show their final destination, the eternal throne.
In the continuation of everything written in the name of love, there were sad remains, but it was the kindness of the God King to the world.
Mortal, you already have a way to die!』
Sigh, avenger, what kind of price do you have to pay for bathing in divine blood!
4:"Starting from One Piece to conquer the world": The plot to dominate the world is pure and invincible. The main character passes through the world of One Piece. Roger is about to become Eam before his execution. He obtains a star map and has the ability to travel back and forth between worlds. The opening of the Tianhu is invincible in the world. The main character rarely appears. The main plot is a group portrait. Each character has a clear focus. Those who don't steal the main character's limelight also have their own wisdom. It can be considered as one of the better group portraits. I give 9.5 points!
5."One Piece: I Become Brother Ming": Staying up late to work overtime and suddenly dying, only to wake up as the younger brother of Dominguez.
The Heavenly Dragon person who lost his noble status and was killed by the commoners.
The one who witnessed her brother killing her father and was adopted by the warring states.
The one who saved the God's Predator…
Don Quijote Rossinandi, who betrayed his brother!
"My stupid brother, is this all you can do?" Looking down at the man who was being stepped on, Rocinandi mocked calmly.
"Douluo: From writing a diary to being the mastermind": Accidentally transmigrated to Douluo Continent, becoming Dugu Bo's grandson.
He had thought that he would start to live a peaceful life, but he did not expect to be bound by the diary system.
Dugu Peng had seen through the system's scheme and cooperated with the system. He had been the mastermind behind the scenes since he started writing the diary, influencing the entire Douluo Continent.
Xiao Wu: This time I want to change my fate, obtain the inheritance, and avenge my mother.
So my mission was to deal with the eight great demons.
Liu Erlong: I didn't expect that Yu Xiao Gang was such a person.
Zhu Zhuqing: Beat up the shameless fiancé and become the God of Shadow.
'Gu Yuena, you obtained the Azure Dragon's inheritance and led the dragon clan to defeat those high and mighty gods in the Divine Realm.'
……
"This is what a fantasy world should look like. It's not a world where people are killed by hidden weapons." Dugu Peng looked at the Douluo Continent that had been demonically altered by him with satisfaction.
7."Gotjo Doesn't Want to Be Koba Naruto":"Tear the script of the spell and return to the Ninja Realm to become the strongest!"
The Son of God Gojo, who had awakened his six eyes, had his hands in his pockets that year and didn't know what his opponent was until he saw a manga book called "The Return of Mantra" by the manga artist, Muomi.
When he saw the adult Gotto Gojo cut in half by Su Nuo's Dimensional Slash, the young Gotto Gojo was completely enraged.
Good, good, good, this is how you play!
Invincible for 30 years, unable to protect anyone around him, and in the end, reduced to a clown character?
Just as he was thinking about how to tear the future sunuo apart with his bare hands, he suddenly received two system notifications.
"Obtained a Curse Spirit Clone that can evolve infinitely through the negative emotions provided by others?"
"Dimensional space has been opened. You can freely travel through the Second World-Naruto?"
When curses and ninjutsu were combined, what kind of monster or god would be created?
……
Many years later.
The number one in Ninja Realm, the strongest Cursemancer of all time, the strongest humanoid Super Curse Spirit in the world, the Master of Six Paths...
"You're dead!" Gojo, who had many titles, stepped into the Shinjuku battlefield. He spread his hands."Sumuno, I didn't even use my strength. How did you fall?" You're even worse than a man named Uchiha Ban."
8:"I'm the villain after all":"I incited Naruto to rebel in Naruto Kingdom."
"I'm in the Alien Blade Kingdom, plundering the Holy Grail of Heaven."
"I refined Momosuke into a Devil Fruit in the Pirate Kingdom."
"If gods really exist, perhaps, no, I will definitely become their target."
Bai Yi casually tore apart an angel. This so-called messenger of God was really disappointing.
Bai Yi shook off the golden divine blood on his hand and reached out to grab the back of a female angel, pulling her into his arms.
"But I'm the villain, after all. It's normal for me to be a little savage."
9."The Path of the Lord God Begins from Naruto": Do you want to obtain unrivaled power?
Do you want to resurrect your loved ones?
Do you want to live forever and control your destiny?
If you want it, I can give it all to you. Go find it!
He would go to the myriad worlds and the endless universe to find the possibility of miracles-the God's Space!
As the owner of the Creator Space, Zhu Shen looked at the Reincarnators who were full of vitality and felt extremely gratified.
Which world should he go to today?
You can read these novels on Qidian Chinese Network.
Well, in this 'naruto master of everything fanfiction', perhaps it's a tale where Naruto has not only mastered all the known ninja arts but also has a deep understanding of politics and diplomacy in the ninja world. He could be using his new - found all - round mastery to bring peace and unity among the different ninja villages. He might be depicted as a super - powerful and all - knowing character, making decisions that shape the entire Naruto universe in ways we can't even imagine in the official storyline.
I'm not entirely sure specifically what that particular 'naruto numb to hate fanfiction' is about without reading it. But generally, in Naruto fanfictions, it could be about Naruto developing a numbness towards hate, perhaps after experiencing a great deal of enmity in the Naruto universe. It might explore his mental state and how he copes with the constant presence of hatred around him.
Maybe you dislike it because a lot of fanfictions deviate too much from the original Naruto story. They might change the characters' personalities in ways that don't seem true to the source material.