One great fanfiction could be where Loid and Yor's first kiss is a result of a near - miss mission. They think they might lose each other and in a moment of intense emotion, they share a kiss. It's a sweet and unexpected moment that deepens their connection.
Some writers might describe it as a passionate, long - awaited kiss. They could use words like 'fiery' or 'intense' to convey the strong emotions between Fiona and Shrek.
A good Loid x Yor kiss fanfiction should have well - developed characters. The build - up to the kiss is crucial. It could start with small, subtle moments of attraction between them, like lingering glances or accidental touches. This creates anticipation for the readers.