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There were novels similar to " 1."I Have a Broken Game Panel" by Yu Yusong in the Rain 2:"The Cannon Mage", Author: Mo Xiang 3."Cultivation Begins from the Game", Author: Ask the Heavens to Find the Way 4."My Game World Alone", Author: Young Sky 5. Taotie Warlock, Author: Cheng Jianxin 6. My Skills Have Special Effects. Author: Lin Zhi 7:"I Can Cultivate My Martial Arts." Author: Lai Dongdong is not bad. 8: Forbidden God Mage, Author: Tai Shen 9."Cultivation Begins from Collecting Character Cards." Author: Beside the text 10:"My Experience in the Other World", Author: Soldier Seal "The Strongest Player in the Liver", Author: Leaf Against the Water 12:"There's a Big Problem with My Image Lord Game." Author: Eat a Mantou Chapter 13: Being a Boor in a Wuxia Word Game, Author: Monster Yuan Cultivation Simulation, Author: Ye Henshui "I'm Saving Words in Samsara." Author: Book Desolate, Write a Book Yourself "My Other World Is Game Mode", Author: Lost Solar Sail "Otherworld: I've loaded the Profession Panel." Author: The Snail that Ran Mystery Makes Me Strong, Author: Mu Heng Dream God, Author: Featherman 20:"Western Fantasy: I Can Unlimited Scrolls", Author: Fan Yin Buyu The following is a detailed introduction of these novels: 1."I Have a Broken Game Panel": It's readable, the settings are interesting, but the pace is too slow. Hay + 2."Cannon Mage": Nice "Cultivation Begins From Games":"The Realm of Divine Martial Arts is an ordinary virtual game." Lu Yu looked at his friend's warning-there was a high chance that dying in the game would lead to brain death. He was silent. "The Realm of Divine Martial Arts is trying its best to create a real game world for the players so that every player can experience the most authentic experience in the game. Lu Yu looked at the iron bars that he had accidentally crushed. The Realm of Divine Martial Arts allowed him to experience the real effect of cultivation in reality. "The Realm of Divine Martial Arts is a game for the sake of the players. There is absolutely no way to recharge. Lu Yu silently looked at the game store that only he had, and then silently clicked to top up. A game without money was a game without a soul. 4."My Alone Game World": I am the only one in reality, the game is a little weak. The main character is called Zhang Yong (what a simple name), and his job is a Pugilist and a Mage (Many people scold the main character for not using a Mage directly…the author has explained). The game world only has the main character (as the title says). The main character's later stage route should be to show his divinity in reality and spread Chinese martial arts (?) 5."Taotie Warlock": reasonable, interesting, but unpleasant "My Skills Have Special Effects": In the world of the dynasty, martial arts were magnificent. Lin Yan awakened the memories of his previous life and struggled to survive with his half-sister. Fortunately, after awakening his Goldfinger, as long as his skill proficiency reached 100%, he could sublimate his skill to the extreme and produce strange effects. [Devour-[Detoxification]: Invulnerable to all poisons. Consuming poisonous creatures can convert qi and blood to feed oneself.] [Five Birds Hand-Rejuvenation: Consumes qi and blood to recover injuries] Dragon Form Fist-[Cloud from Dragon]: Roaming Dragon in the Wind, Speed Doubles Instantly. [Mountain Breaking Fist-Wind from Tiger]: White Tiger Breaks the Army, the explosive power instantly doubles. Attack-[Godly Ape Strike]: Gather all your strength into one point. Defense-[Formless]: Spread the attack evenly to all parts of the body …… A secret realm wrapped in poisonous miasma, one would die upon touching it, and no one could enter? I have [Devour-Detoxification], so I can enter and exit the secret realm at will. Practicing martial arts was harmful to the body, and he had to use secret medicine to offset the injury? I have [Five Bird Hand: Rejuvenation], so I don't have to be afraid to practice as I please. Every special effect was a cheat. Demons and devils were in chaos, people were like ghosts, and the world was in chaos. With the thought of invincibility, he opened up a broad road and looked down at the true colors of the mountains and rivers. 7."My Martial Arts Can Cultivate on Its Own": Quite creative, but the writing style is slightly immature. I hope that good works won't be buried. 8."Forbidden God Mage": A thousand years after the recuperation of reiki, the first generation of Awakened ones shattered the Earth and stepped into the starry sky to find a new home, leaving behind a broken Earth. All kinds of mutated creatures emerged one after another, and the weak stubbornly resisted. Lin Fan, who was unable to cultivate due to his weak consciousness, decided to create his own cheat in order to step onto the path of cultivation! A mage, I know. Holy Mage, do you know? 9."Cultivation Begins from Collecting Character Cards": This is a dangerous world where even ordinary villagers are focused on cultivation. Here, the dynasty had yet to be established, and the city-states were everywhere, with various factions fighting endlessly. Xu Gu'an, who was only a villager A, hoped that she would have a good life in the future. Just as she was worried about her survival, she entered the game when reality came. Collect character cards in real life and steadily explore the game dungeon. Gradually, Xu Gu'an realized that the world's powerhouses and the elites were just the elite monsters he had seen in the dungeon. [Dungeon Reward Obtained: Fairy's Clothes] "Fairy, as I expected, you wore pink yesterday..." "Heaven rewards hard work. My entire life of cultivation is based on my hard work and hard work!" 10:"My Experience in the Other World": Storyline, farming skills and experience in the other world. There's nothing new about cheats. From the small mortal world to the cultivation world, people who are low-key and decisive can watch this type. [Overall evaluation: 73 points] "The Strongest Player in the Liver" Category: Fantasy [Protagonist: Jiang Yang] [Status: Series in progress] [Author: Leaf Against the Water (LV5)] Word Count: 1,029,600 Ranking index: A brief introduction: Jiang Yang had a photographic memory, but he could not stand up because of his leg disease. With the appearance of the spiritual butterfly that could travel through the Otherworld, Jiang Yang relied on his photographic memory and comprehension ability to make a name for himself in the Otherworld and reality. Description: Whenever someone asked Jiang Yang,"Do you have a liver all over your body?" Jiang Yang smiled but did not say anything. He needed to use his brain when it came to matters like the liver! On the night of the new moon, with the spiritual butterfly as a guide, countless people from the Blue Planet stepped into another world as players. At this point, the highest pursuit of the players was no longer to win the championship and glory, but to transcend the world and be invincible! The strongest player. [Tweet: The style of this book is more like I Have a Two-World Seal, but the difference is that it combines the structure of the recuperation of reiki. Everyone can transmigrate to another world to learn martial arts.] The story structure of this book was quite novel. The overall plot of the book was relatively smooth, but the content was a little dull. [Overall, the overall architecture is biased towards fighting monsters and leveling up. It's still worth a look if you're interested.] "There's a Big Problem with My Pixellord Game": Lu Nan returned home from work and accidentally discovered a Pixellord game he had never seen before. In the game, Lu Nan obtained three talents. [Reincarnation](Undead's only talent): Transforms living creatures into undead. If the target is a plant, the vitality emitted by the plant can be transformed into death. [Seed of Evil](Unique Talent): Plant a thought in the mind of a designated unit. The thought will not be removed and will become stronger. [Fate Recovery](Soul's Only Talent) All units in the territory can slowly increase their attributes through training, meditation, battle, and other methods. There is no upper limit to the increase, but the speed of increase varies according to the unit's grade. When Lu Nan brushed past the lady who had come out to throw the trash next door, Lu Nan was surprised to find that he could actually use the Seed of Evil on this lady! There was a huge problem with this game! 13:"Being a Boor in a Wuxia Word Game":"May I ask what is the most crucial secret behind your achievements today?" All kinds of lights shone on Chu Junhui's face, and his calm expression was deeply imprinted in history. "Reckless! How can you not be reckless when playing Wuxia games!" …… The two word games and the extraordinary power of projecting reality had turned the Blue Planet upside down. The main character of the game was the word "Gou", which meant "Yun Dan Feng Qing Yi". In a Wuxia game, the main character of the players was 'Reckless.' 14."Cultivation Simulation Device"(Xianxia·Series) Qidian was an old writer, trustworthy, humorous, and logical. Reward Index ́ ́́ ́ ́ ́́️ I'm Saving Words in Samsara: I wrote it, hehe "My Other World Is Game Mode": Raising In the Otherworld, people studied skills and awakened extraordinary powers. The Knights of Law followed their words, the Seven Seas Alliance changed the world with their brushes, the School of War had the courage to fight against ten thousand men, and the School of Life pointed directly at the source of life. After coming to this world, Lin Dong looked at his skills-[RPG],[GAL],[Business Simulation],[Horror Game],[FPS]… This was still okay, right? "Otherworld: I've loaded the Class Interface":"The reason why I'm so much stronger than you is because I've awakened a hundred million more classes than you." Raymond, who had classes like Berserker, Great Alchemist, Dragon Knight, Paladin, Great Mage, Sword Saint, Warrior Saint, and so on, said to his companions beside him. Reincarnate into another world and obtain the profession panel. As long as you meet the requirements for awakening a profession, you can awaken that profession. "[Pugilist] Awakening Requirement: Defeat at least one of the opponents when surrounded by at least three people." [Warrior] Awakening Requirement: Kill ten monsters with normal weapons.] (PS: The sun is light and the wind is gentle. Don't enter if you don't like it.) "Mystery Makes Me Strong": Easy to read, has its own style. For those who love their country and understand current affairs, it's a good book. Don't read it, Banana Man "God of Dreams": There are quite a lot of elements, and the game ID has two memes. The main character's name was not his real name, but his own. Originally, when she saw him spend the first sum of money and then the second sum of high-value props to buy a house, the main character treated the green snake as a butler, not… After he went offline, he even "abandoned" his "wife" and focused on playing games!🙈 [20:"Western Fantasy: I Can Read Unlimited Words": Come to Yuewen's website to read more of my works! You can read these novels on Qidian Chinese Network.

You can improve it by getting feedback. Share your 16000 words with some beta readers. They can point out things like plot holes or unlikable characters. Also, read a lot of other novels in the same genre. This can give you ideas on how to structure your story better and what kind of language is appropriate. Another thing is to work on the pacing. If some parts seem too slow or too rushed in your 16000 - word novel, adjust them accordingly.

You could start thinking about how to market it. Maybe research some agents or publishers who might be interested in your 16000 - word piece. You can also start building an online presence for your novel, like a blog or social media account related to it.

The reason why the novel had been edited with a mobile phone was probably because the format or layout of the text had changed, resulting in a change in the style and structure of the entire work. If you modify the format of the text, such as converting the text to another font or format, or changing the line spacing, word spacing, font, and other parameters of the text, the style of the entire work will change. This change may affect the cohesiveness and legibility of the work, so readers may feel confused or uncomfortable. If you modify the layout of the text, such as changing the format of the chapter title, paragraph title, body title, etc., or adjusting the spacing, alignment, and other parameters of the text, the structure of the entire work will also change. This change may affect the logic and cohesiveness of the work, and readers may find it difficult to follow the development of the story. If the content of the text is changed, it may cause the story to become incoherent or lose its original meaning, so it needs to be carefully modified. It is suggested that the core content of the original text should be retained when editing the novel, and the format and layout of the text should be adjusted appropriately to make the work more fluent and easier to read.

It depends on the genre and your target audience. Generally, a novel can range from 50,000 to 150,000 words.

It really depends on the genre and your story. Some novels are short, like 50,000 words, while others can be over 100,000 words.

It depends on the genre and your target audience. For a typical young adult novel, around 60,000 to 90,000 words might be good.

It depends on the genre and your target audience. For a young adult novel, around 50,000 to 70,000 words might be a good range.

It really depends on the genre and your target audience. Some novels can be as short as 50,000 words, while others might go up to 150,000 or more.

If I had superpowers, I would use them to help others and improve the world. I can plant bread trees so that people won't starve. I can improve the Earth's environment and make it more beautiful and prosperous. I can help people find jobs so that they don't have to worry about their livelihood. I can stop the war and bring peace to the people. I can make tomorrow better, fill people with laughter and joy. In short, if I had superpowers, I would try my best to make the world a better place.