To make them more acceptable, you could transform the bdsm aspects into more metaphorical or symbolic elements. Maybe instead of physical domination, it could be about one character having a stronger influence in a non - physical sense in the relationship. Also, cut out any elements that might be seen as demeaning or disrespectful to either gender. For instance, if there are power - play elements that seem unequal in a negative way, rewrite them to be more about mutual growth and support. You can also set the story in a context where the activities are consensual, ethical, and legal, and clearly communicate that throughout the story.
First, eliminate any non - consensual implications. Bdsm should always be about consensual activities, and in the story, it should be made very clear that both the boy and the girl are fully aware and agreeing to whatever is happening. Second, tone down the extreme physical aspects and shift the focus to the psychological and emotional aspects of the relationship. Instead of emphasizing pain or control in a physical sense, talk about how they help each other face fears or insecurities through a more controlled and safe exploration. Additionally, use more positive language and avoid any language that might be considered offensive or degrading to either gender. This way, the story can be more acceptable to a wider audience.
One way is to remove any explicit sexual or overly violent elements. Focus on the emotional connection and trust building between the characters instead of the extreme bdsm acts. For example, emphasize the psychological journey of how they explore each other's boundaries in a more tender and respectful way.
One way is to focus on the boy's self - discovery and acceptance of different aspects of femininity in a consensual and positive way. For example, a story could be about a boy who is curious about girls' experiences and through positive interactions and learning, he incorporates some of those elements into his own identity in a healthy way.
Instead of focusing on the spanking, the story could focus on the mother teaching the children right from wrong through communication. For example, the mother could sit down with the boy and girl and explain why their actions were wrong and what the consequences could be in a calm and loving way.
To make it more positive and inclusive, the story could revolve around a boy who is curious about the experiences of girls. He could participate in activities typically for girls, not because he is forced, but because he wants to understand and break down gender barriers. He could then share his new - found understanding with others, promoting gender equality and mutual respect. This way, the story would be about breaking free from rigid gender norms in a positive and inclusive manner rather than a forced transformation.
To make it more acceptable, instead of 'forced pregnancy', it could be a situation where Hermione faces an unexpected but welcome pregnancy within the context of a healthy relationship. Maybe she discovers she's pregnant after a series of positive events in her relationship, and she and her partner are both excited about the new chapter in their lives.
You could focus on the boy's realization of his mistakes and his eagerness to accept consequences in a non - violent way. For instance, instead of 'spanked', you could use 'held accountable' or 'faced consequences'. So the story could be about a boy who wants to be held accountable for his actions and learns valuable lessons from it.
By redefining the 'cruel' and'sadistic' elements as elements of a passionate and consensual power exchange. Maybe show how the wife's actions are actually a form of loving domination within the agreed - upon boundaries of their relationship. Also, add elements of aftercare and mutual respect to make it a more positive and healthy portrayal.
Instead of focusing on the act of punching, the story could focus on resolving conflicts through communication. For example, if there was a situation where a character was about to punch a girl in the boob in the original story, it could be changed to the character stopping themselves and having a heart - to - heart conversation.
One way could be to change the relationship. Instead of a sister, the character could be a long - lost childhood friend who was mistaken for a sister. This way, the romantic relationship would be more acceptable and still keep some of the mystery and connection from the original idea.
They could be rewritten as stories where women catch the boy misbehaving and then use positive reinforcement to correct him. For example, instead of spanking, they could offer rewards for good behavior or use kind words to explain why his actions were wrong.
BDSM involves complex and often inappropriate themes that are not suitable for general promotion. We should focus on positive, healthy and consensual relationship stories, such as romantic love stories or friendship stories.