Often, a story feels like it should end when there's a sense of closure and no loose ends. Maybe when the main goal of the protagonist is achieved or when the themes have been fully explored.
It depends on the plot and character arcs. If all the major conflicts are resolved and the characters have reached a satisfying conclusion, it might feel like the right time to end.
She might feel relieved. Maybe all the problems or conflicts in the story got resolved, so she has a sense of peace at the end.
She probably feels shocked and bitter. After all the hard work for nothing.
Rachel's emotions at the end of the story are a mix of satisfaction and a touch of nostalgia. She's happy with the outcome but also reflects on the journey with some fond memories.
Joby might feel a mix of emotions. Maybe there's a sense of accomplishment for overcoming difficulties, but also a tinge of sadness for what was left behind. It all depends on the specific events of the story.
Oliver might feel relieved and hopeful. After going through all the hardships, he finally finds some peace and a sense of belonging.
He feels relieved and happy. The challenges he faced throughout the story were overcome, and he found peace.
Bilbo feels a sense of accomplishment and contentment. He's had quite the adventure and is ready to settle down.
At first, he could be angry. After all, his autonomy is being taken away. But as time passes, he may start to have mixed feelings. He could find some aspects of the girl's clothing comfortable or interesting, while still being resentful of the situation. He might also start to empathize more with girls if he experiences some of the things they do while dressed as one, like the way people interact with him differently or the types of comments he gets.
He may initially feel a sense of shock. It's unexpected to be forced into such a situation. And as time goes on, if he can't escape this forced dressing, he could feel a deep sense of helplessness. He might be constantly worried about what others will think of him and may start to withdraw from social interactions out of fear of being ridiculed.
A paragraph should end when you've completed presenting a single thought or idea. It's like a mini-conclusion within the story.