I'd suggest having a private and honest conversation. Start by saying you care about them and their writing, then mention the areas that didn't quite work for you in a kind way. Maybe offer some suggestions on how they could improve.
I'd say be really gentle and start with something positive about their effort before getting into the areas you think need improvement.
Maybe approach it like this: 'I know you put a lot of effort into this story, and there are some great elements. However, I think it might need a little more focus on the ending to make it more satisfying.'
Be honest and empathetic. Try to understand the feelings of others and avoid saying things that could be offensive or insensitive.
Avoid insensitive language and be cautious of the topics you choose. Also, focus on positive and inspiring elements in the story.
They might start to act a bit differently around you. For example, they could be more nervous or shy, which is different from their usual self in the friendship. Another sign could be that they make more of an effort to look nice when they know they're going to see you. And if they start remembering small details about you that are more related to a romantic interest, like your favorite flower or song in a more affectionate way.
You could give him some subtle hints. For example, when he pauses, you can say something like 'This is really interesting, but I'm a bit short on time right now. Can you get to the main point soon?'. It's a gentle way to nudge him towards the end.
School sucks because of the early mornings. Having to wake up before the sun is even fully up just to catch the bus is torture. It makes me so tired all day long.
Yes, you can. You can simply say you have other things to attend to or that you're not in the right headspace for that kind of story at the moment. For example, 'I'm really sorry, but I've got a lot on my mind right now and can't really focus on this story.'
Tell her you need some time to think about it. This gives you space to process your own feelings and also shows her that you're taking her request seriously.
It depends on various factors. In some cases, it's completely ethical. People often develop feelings for those they are close to. However, if there are other relationships involved or if one person is taking advantage of the friendship, then it's not okay. It's important to communicate openly and honestly about these feelings.
Immediately change the subject. You could say something like 'Hey, that's not a good topic. Have you seen any interesting movies lately?' This shows that you don't want to engage in such inappropriate talk. Also, it's important to convey that this kind of story is not acceptable in a normal conversation without being rude.