How about this introduction? This is a novel I wrote. If it's not good, please help me edit it. Make it attractive. Thank you.

A high school student, Wang Tian, was killed by a gang leader after angering him. As a result, his soul came to a place called the Black Earth Continent and possessed a young man named Hong Li who had just unfortunately died. This young man was the fourth son of the Hong family, but he was a good-for-nothing. He relied on the power of his family to bully his daughter. In the end, he was struck by lightning and killed. Wang Tian possessed his body and, by chance, obtained an old man who had once reached the peak of the continent. Let's see how Wang Tian will advance step by step towards the peak of the continent and become a god in the three reincarnation cycles.

Answer 1

This introduction was very attractive and filled with suspense and tension. However, if you want the novel to be more attractive, you can try to provide more details and plots in the introduction to let the readers understand the background and characters of the story more deeply.

Here are some suggestions for changes:

- The description of the background of the story and the identity of the protagonist allowed the reader to better understand the background of the story and the relationship between the characters.
- The introduction of some key characters such as the protagonist's friends or enemies allows the reader to better understand the character's personality and motives.
- Description of the plot and turning points of the story allows the reader to predict the development of the story and generate curiosity.
- Use some fascinating adjectives and phrases such as mysterious atmosphere, amazing discovery, incredible plot, etc. to enhance the attraction of the novel.

I hope these suggestions will help make the novel more attractive!