I received feedback from a fan. He said that my novel can't be commented on.
The feedback from fans that the novel could not be commented on could be because the novel was not completed or was being edited. In this case, fans could not comment on the novel because they could not participate in the creation and revision of the novel. If the novel has been published and edited, fans can comment on the content of the novel. If the novel was being published, fans could wait until the novel was published before commenting. If the novel has not been published yet, fans can try to read the novel and post their own comments.
Can you give feedback on my fan fiction?
Of course. Let me know what makes it special or any concerns you have about it before I start reading.
The novel said that it was free, but he said that it wasn't. Was he lying?
Not necessarily. Some novels are free, but at the beginning, readers may be prompted to download or read them for free, but in the later chapters, they may suddenly announce that the free chapters are no longer free. At this time, readers may think that the novel is deceiving, but in fact, this may be a marketing strategy of the author to attract more readers and increase the popularity and influence of the novel. However, if you feel that the novel has deceived you, you can choose to purchase the complete version of the novel to ensure that you get all the chapters.
I received a distress message from my daughter
[After three years of guarding the border, I received a distress message from my daughter. It was an urban romance novel.] The story was about the protagonist who received a distress message from his daughter when he was fighting a bloody battle at the border. He learned that his daughter's mother was going to remarry. The protagonist was no longer the down-and-out son-in-law of the past, but the Demon God who ruled the world's number one faction. He decided to protect his daughter and her mother and never bow down to anyone. However, other than that, the search results did not provide any specific plot and details.
In a dubbing app, someone commented on my dubbing and said," I want to eat your voice." What was he trying to express?
It is impossible to determine the exact meaning of this comment because there are many possible explanations for this sentence. There were several possible explanations: This sentence may be a compliment, indicating that the listener likes the commentator's dubbing work very much and wants to hear more of their voices. This sentence could also be a teasing sentence, indicating that the listener is very charming or moving to the commentator's voice, even like the sound of some kind of delicious food. This last sentence may be a misunderstanding because "I want to eat" is usually not a meaningful expression. Therefore, it was necessary to further understand the specific context of the commentator to determine its true meaning.
How can I get feedback on my final draft used for a novel?
You could also post parts of it on writing forums. There are many avid readers and fellow writers there who might be willing to give you their thoughts on your novel's final draft. Just be careful not to share too much if you plan to publish it in the future.
He Zongwei commented
He Zongwei was described in the TV series " Celebrating Years " as a small figure. He had no power or influence and could only constantly switch thighs in order to survive and realize his dreams. He had once displayed talent and arrogance, but in the end, he was suppressed and poisoned by Fan Xian. His character was belittled in the play and looked down upon by Fan Xian and the others. He Zongwei's evaluation varied from person to person. Some people thought he was hypocritical and snobbish, while Fan Xian held a disdainful and annoyed attitude toward him. However, there were also people who felt that He Zongwei's fate was very pitiful. He had a pitiful background and had no way out of the imperial examinations. He had relied on his loyalty to the emperor to be put in an important position, but in the end, he was swatted to death by Fan Xian like a fly. In general, He Zongwei's evaluation in the drama wasn't high. He was seen as an unremarkable character.
He Zongwei commented
He Zongwei was described in the TV series " Celebrating Years " as a small figure. He had no power or influence and could only constantly switch thighs in order to survive and realize his dreams. He had once displayed talent and arrogance, but in the end, he was suppressed and poisoned by Fan Xian. His character was belittled in the play and looked down upon by Fan Xian and the others. He Zongwei's ending was failure and death.
He Zongwei commented
He Zongwei was described in the TV series " Celebrating Years " as a small figure. He had no power or influence and could only constantly switch thighs in order to survive and realize his dreams. He had once displayed talent and arrogance, but in the end, he was suppressed and poisoned by Fan Xian. His character was belittled in the play and looked down upon by Fan Xian and the others. He Zongwei's ending was failure and death.
If I told a guy that I won't chat with you anymore and you don't reply to my messages, what would he think? He said he would be very angry, I asked why, he said he didn't
This kind of situation usually appeared in novels or anime because the two sides of the conversation usually had emotional entanglements, so this sudden indifference and not replying to the message might cause dissatisfaction and anger from the other party. However, in real life, if you suddenly tell a guy that you won't chat with him in the future, he might not be angry because it might be a simple decision and it doesn't necessarily mean that there is any conflict or problem between you. Of course, he might feel disappointed or sad, but that didn't mean he would be angry. If they wanted to avoid this situation, it was best to communicate in advance so that they had enough time to understand and accept each other's decisions. At the same time, you should also maintain respect and understanding. Don't suddenly give the other person the cold shoulder. This may make him feel respected and improve their relationship.
How to get feedback on my novel manuscript?
You could approach writing coaches or mentors. They have the expertise to give in-depth feedback and point out areas for improvement. Another option is to participate in writing contests where the judges' comments can be valuable feedback for your novel manuscript.