Not writing a novel was not a bad sentence. This is a complete sentence that represents the name of an action or process. In Chinese, it was common to place a verb before a verb, such as "write","compose","compose", etc. This usage can express the effect of a verb on a verb, making the sentence more fluent and natural.
I'm not sure what sentence you want me to change. Please provide more specific information so that I can help you better.
What kind of novel do you like?
He fell in love with her. He found that she was in love with him.
May I ask what wrong sentence do you need me to correct?
Of course, the original word could be modified like this: We should respect their opinions. This modification was in line with the common language design of modern literature to make the sentence more fluent and easy to understand.
Of course, I can continue to explain your question in a more stable way. Do you have any questions that require my help?
He is a young, promising, and talented man. His works are very popular with readers. After editing: He is a young and talented person. His works have a unique style and are deeply loved by readers.
Why hasn't he come back yet? Cause: The sentence structure is chaotic, and the subject and the predicates are inconsistent. In the original sentence, the subject was "he" but the predicates were "not back yet", causing the sentence structure to be chaotic. It should read: Why hadn't he come back yet? The revised sentence structure was clearer, the subject was clear, and the predicates were correct.
This sentence itself was not a bad sentence because its grammar was correct and its meaning was clear. But it might be seen by some readers as a "routine" or "template" because similar expressions are more common in novel writing. Therefore, if you want to express similar emotions and meanings in the novel, you can use more personal language such as metaphor, metaphor, contrast, etc. to highlight the effect of the character.