How could a novel describe a conversation between two people?

The two of them had to exchange a few words, but A said,"..." "..." It was a little silly. If A said it with a bitter smile and B said it after thinking for a while, then he didn't know how to describe it. For example, if A had already smiled bitterly, would he still smile bitterly?
There was another question, such as,(He walked and searched, and unknowingly came to an alley. There was a sign at the entrance of the alley-Falling Flower Alley. The alley was very narrow, just big enough for a Dongfeng truck to pass through.) The word 'alley' appeared four times in this sentence. It's a little long-winded. Can you write it in another way? Thank you.

Answer 1

When describing the scene of the conversation between the two, one could start from the following aspects:

The two sides of the dialogue: describe the two sides of the dialogue, including their appearance, personality, identity, etc., so that readers can better understand the relationship between the two people and the content of the dialogue.

2. The form of the conversation: The description of the form of the conversation includes the accent, tone, speed, etc. of the two people so that the reader can better understand the way of communication and emotional state between the two people.

3. The content of the dialogue: The content of the dialogue includes the topics, opinions, emotions, etc. discussed by the two people so that the readers can better understand the theme of communication and emotional resonance between the two people.

4. The background of the dialogue: The description of the background of the dialogue includes the environment and atmosphere of the two people so that the readers can better understand the atmosphere and emotional changes between the two people.

For example, the following is an example of a scene describing a conversation between two people:

The two of them sat in the corner of the cafe, holding hands. She smiled at him while he held her hand tightly as if there was a special connection between the two of them.

"What are you busy with?" she asked.

"I'm writing a novel." he replied.

"Write a novel? What kind of novel is it?" she asked curiously.

"I write science fiction novels." he replied.

" Oh, I don't know much about science fiction, but it sounds interesting." She said with a smile.

" Yes, I hope that my novel can give people more thoughts and inspiration." His tone was filled with enthusiasm and anticipation.

The dialogue between the two was full of emotions and details. By describing their appearance, personality, identity, and dialogue, readers could better understand the way they communicated and the emotional resonance between them. At the same time, through the background and tone of the conversation, the readers could better feel the atmosphere and emotional changes between the two.