I am now a senior high school student. The teacher thinks that my essay is not deep enough. Whose essay should I read? What should I do?

Senior three students who wanted to improve the depth of their thoughts in their essays could refer to the following suggestions: 1. Reading classic literature works: Literature works can help students expand their thinking and improve their language skills. He could read the plays of shakespeare, the novels of bacon, the works of dickens, and so on. These works had a high depth of thought and literary value. Reading the works of philosophers: The works of philosophers can help students understand the development of human thought and culture, improve their thinking ability and language expression ability. You can read the works of philosophers such as Plato, aristotle, Kant, and Hegel. 3. Reading historical documents: historical documents can help students understand the development of human civilization and improve their historical awareness and cultural accomplishment. You can read historical documents such as Records of the Historian and Zi Zhi Tong Jian. 4. Read news and current affairs articles: News and current affairs articles can help you understand social hot topics and current affairs issues and improve your sensitivity to news and social responsibility. You can read the New Yorker, Times, and other news and current affairs magazines. In order to improve the depth of the essay, you can read more articles of different types and constantly expand your thinking and cultural vision. At the same time, he could think more about the problems that he was interested in and cultivate his critical thinking and independent thinking skills.