Thank you, I appreciate your review. I plan to flesh out most of your concerns by the end of the first volume which will probably remain free once the novel goes premium. As for Clifford, his power will keep pushing him in one direction until an incedent happens later.

Yes. However, I assure you there won't be any groups or d*ck riders due to how the MC is designed. Rather, the majority won't approach him due to his nature.

Poison Test: Moderate. Alright then, the first thing you may want to know is that the author writes in Arabic then translates to English. As the result the grammar is all over the place and some stuff are translated incorrectly (Ex: Leon asks the system to unlock the skill: "skill unlock system" or (someone asked the author if there is ntr which he responded 'no' then 'yes, a lot' to ntr'd). Story is pretty normal, nothing special so far. I may say that author did shot himself in the foot by locking at the chapter 20. Other than that, I see nothing else worse mentioning.

Yes, not anytime soon though. You can say about 200 chapters in.

Shameless review here, as the author I'm confident my book is good enough for the majority. However, be warned about the MC's savage nature since his brutally may not appeal to everyone. Feel free to ask any questions you have.

Glad you like it, it will be explained further later on.

Yes, last year. I have 1 final exam to graduate .

You are welcome, glad you are enjoying.

Thank you, it will continue this way and hopefully I will improve as I gain more experience. P.S sorry for the late response, had to rest after the exam.

Yes, that would be better. Also this should be Jianghu not Murim given you are using Chinese names for your characters.

Let's keep this as simple as possible, I saw this in the novel ranks and decided to give it a try, but I couldn't get past chapter 3. What put me down wasn't story related, rather it was the quality of the writing itself. First, large spaces here and there. You could try using the preview feature in your chapter publishing before publishing to improve that. Second, the grammar and spelling are simply bad resulting in a lot of question marks whenever I'm trying to read. Ex1: [A thousand years ago, they were defeated in the Demon-Human War and sealed here by the "Child of Destiny". They have not given up. Up until now, all along within these years, they still clung to life using the meagre resource, slowly recovering his racial truly let them finally breathing out a deep breath.] All good until "slowly recovering", then what? You should have ended the sentence at 'slowly recovering' with a dot but what did the sentence after that mean? "his racial truly let them finally breathing out a deep breath." Ex2: [They were starving, coldness with endless darkness rampant and they replicated themselves waiting for a thousand years.] No Comment. Ex3: ["Great demon king, I am the succubus demon Eileen, the enchantment of the demon race, our clan is willing to offer our essence for accomplish our king's fate"] She's an...enchantment? for accomplish? ------------ Other than that, the opening of chapter 3 is off as well. It just feels like a first-person POV then a third-person POV then a first-person POV again.

magazines under his bed...in murim?